@Suzie Creamcheese rules were made to be broken! Not sure about the google map area yet. Right now it's set to go full opacity on roll over but we may play with some of the API's out there.
I consider you a very talented designer, but personally I think this page is boring. The walls of text are unlikely to be read especially since the lines are so long, the contrast makes the text very hard to read, and spacing between paragraphs is inconsistent. It's clean and a good start, but needs a bit more work imo.
This looks so clean! My one suggestion would be to be careful of your line length under the "New Approach" and "Our Goal" sections, maybe splitting it up into two columns.
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Charlie Waite
Reworked case study page. Going with an editorial style layout, also added a sidebar nav to jump between case studies. Type is still a WIP.
Make sure to check out the real pixel for the full page view.
2 Column text layout: http://cl.ly/image/2u3O151e0n2c/o
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4 months ago
This is a really clean. Nice layout.
4 months ago
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Suzie Creamcheese
Rad! Totally breaking the max. characters per line rule, but you get away with it with this! ;)
Also, will the google maps be colour-customized?
4 months ago
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Charlie Waite
Thanks @Wade Meredith!
4 months ago
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Charlie Waite
@Suzie Creamcheese rules were made to be broken! Not sure about the google map area yet. Right now it's set to go full opacity on roll over but we may play with some of the API's out there.
4 months ago
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Epic Design & Media
Love that orange area and how you divided the two sides. Looks snazzy. +1
4 months ago
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Ted Goas
Nice layout Charlie. I think you've done a great job with the type and spacing, but damn that's alotta text!
4 months ago
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Charlie Waite
@Ted Gross yeah it's way to much - we might suggest cutting it half but we will see. =)
4 months ago
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Charlie Waite
Yeah colors are coming together nicely - thanks @Epic Design & Media
4 months ago
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Kyle Chicoine
Can I give you a high five @Charlie Waite? Nice work man! :)
4 months ago
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Charlie Waite
@Kyle Chicoine high five in 3...2..1..boom!
4 months ago
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Patrik Ward
This is lovely! I would be curious to see the headers with a little more contrast.
4 months ago
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Phil Lester
I consider you a very talented designer, but personally I think this page is boring. The walls of text are unlikely to be read especially since the lines are so long, the contrast makes the text very hard to read, and spacing between paragraphs is inconsistent. It's clean and a good start, but needs a bit more work imo.
4 months ago
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Charlie Waite
@Phil Lester thanks for the feedback. Playing with the body type and how much copy we will be using. I will keep playing with it.
4 months ago
This looks so clean! My one suggestion would be to be careful of your line length under the "New Approach" and "Our Goal" sections, maybe splitting it up into two columns.
4 months ago
delicious.
4 months ago
its really nice Charlie :)
4 months ago
Very slick looking! Clean and simple conquers all :)
4 months ago
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Charlie Waite
@Ben Gage great call on the 2 columns. Funny things that don't come to you when you stare at something for hours =)
Hows this: http://cl.ly/image/2u3O151e0n2c/o
4 months ago
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Charlie Waite
@Phil Lester @Suzie Creamcheese @Kristy Black @Jordan Egstad @Andrey S. Rodrigues @Patrik Ward @Kyle Chicoine @Ted Goas @Epic Design & Media - thanks for all the great feedback on this. I posted a new 2 column layout for the text - FYI
http://cl.ly/image/2u3O151e0n2c/o
4 months ago
@Charlie Waite Good stuff! Much better flow for the eyes.
4 months ago
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Andreas Ubbe Dall
Looks great, I'd definitely go with the 2-column layout as well, should increase legibility.
4 months ago
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Josh Austin
Those colors are perfect.
4 months ago
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Craig Stubblefield
yes.
4 months ago
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Mirco Moretti
Love that… |≡|≡| style
4 months ago