A Little Critique

12 Responses

1. Justin Schafer

   Hey guys, looking for a good ole fashioned critique. See the attachment to compare the two options.

   1. Top or bottom?
   2. Thoughts on "Creative" vs "Design" or combining them both "Creative + Design"
   3. Knockout the line around the "F"?
   4. Any other thoughts?

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   5 months ago

2. Tamas Kojo

   great typo!

   5 months ago

3. Parker Peterson

   I like "Schafer Design" personally. Keep the line around the f, it defines the letterform so it doesn't get lost in your underline.

   Nice work.

   5 months ago

4. Brandon Herbel

   Bottom version for sure!

   What about just having it Schafer and not using "Design" or "Creative"?

   I think the line as it is in the 2nd version is great. Knocking it out won't be a bad idea either. A strong logo regardless..

   My only other suggestion is maybe trying it inside of a circle? Could be cool to have that other option.

   5 months ago

5. ryan bren

   beautiful man. I like the bottom one but knock out the F. I say drop the 'creative' or 'design' and just rock 'Schafer' by itself.

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   5 months ago

6. Jeremy Teff

   Bottom for sure! Agreed with the others on knocking the "F" out of the line.

   5 months ago

7. Joe Sparano

   1. top — the mirrored curves on the bottom look to me like they're intentionally framing the "cha", and the straight line is a stronger baseline.

   2. "design" — design involves creativity anyway, and it sounds smarter.

   3. it's a toss-up.

   5 months ago

8. Andrew Littmann

   I like the top one...definitely knockout the f, it looks a little off without that and I like the idea of just going with Schafer by itself...at least for logo purposes, I think that script is strong enough.

   5 months ago

9. Derrick Kempf

   I like the top version for the swoosh, the knockout of the line under the "f" and the "creative".

   5 months ago

10. Matt Welnack

    I like the bottom type treatment, it feels a little tighter and more cohesive (the space around the S + c), but I would knock out the F. And Schafer Design rolls off the tongue nicer

    5 months ago

11. Lee Woodbridge

    I like the bottom one but prefer creative. I'm also with the others that It holds its own without the creative or design.
    Good job.

    5 months ago

12. Harrison Connally

    Great script type. I assume you made it yourself. hats off to you my friend.

    4 months ago