its really hard to read... after focusing for a while, I found the letters. I guess it would improve when you give the letters more colour contrast though. :)
yea it's executed really well, but just making each letter a different color (or different value/shade of a color) would make each letter instantly readable
try making the J extend on top and bottom bringing dominance, and play with color combos so you can see each letter, sometimes that helps seeing different shapes. great work!
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Justin Barber
any suggestions? i know it could use improvements
4 months ago
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Aldrich Tan
its really hard to read... after focusing for a while, I found the letters. I guess it would improve when you give the letters more colour contrast though. :)
4 months ago
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Brandon Moore
yea it's executed really well, but just making each letter a different color (or different value/shade of a color) would make each letter instantly readable
4 months ago
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Nicholas D'Amico
try making the J extend on top and bottom bringing dominance, and play with color combos so you can see each letter, sometimes that helps seeing different shapes. great work!
4 months ago
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Justin Barber
thanks @Aldrich Tan @Brandon Moore
@Nicholas D'Amico don't quite follow what you mean by extending the J. like have it match the B in height?
4 months ago