I've combined some ideas thanks to your suggestions. Anything you would change/modify? What about the text vertical stack vs. one line across?
over 2 years ago
I like it, its a powerful mark. Definitely improved from the last shot. Good texturing, and it feels much more "human" than before.
I like the vertical stack, but I feel...uneasy...when I look at it. Maybe that's what you're going for, but something about the horizontal alignments make it look like a Jenga tower ready to tip over :P
I think the "globe" element (fork, globe, spoon) should be enlarged to the same width as the "meal" element. Or maybe the "meal" element gets shrunk to align with the globe, instead.
As well, the "one" should be the same width as "skip", right now it is a bit too wide (I think).
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