Working on the iconic mark for WOLF & WHISPER. Client requested a wolf and crescent moon in the mark. This is still very rough. Feedback and critique please.
Thanks Andy! The moon is definitely the struggle now. It seems to be a one way or the other situation. Either the moon is more prevalent, and the ampersand completion lacks, or vise versa like now. Will keep working, thanks for the input!
Like it a lot. Agree with Andy a bit. Didn't recognize it as a moon. Seems like the moon shape needs to be refined a bit anyway. Only other things that throw me are the inner shape in the ear and the two large triangle shapes below the ear. Those don't match the rest of the line work to me...
Great critique Travis! Thank you! I'm going to address and work through your suggestions. I appreciate your eye and input. And thank you Andrea. Conclusively, the moon definitely needs more work!
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Mackey Saturday
Working on the iconic mark for WOLF & WHISPER. Client requested a wolf and crescent moon in the mark. This is still very rough. Feedback and critique please.
over 1 year ago
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Morgan Allan Knutson
Whoa!! I LOVE it! Holy moly.
over 1 year ago
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Andy Chipperfield
Love the idea and it works really well. I didn't see the moon first of all though. Does it still complete the ampersand making it shallower?
over 1 year ago
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Mackey Saturday
Thanks Andy! The moon is definitely the struggle now. It seems to be a one way or the other situation. Either the moon is more prevalent, and the ampersand completion lacks, or vise versa like now. Will keep working, thanks for the input!
over 1 year ago
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Travis Fleck
Like it a lot. Agree with Andy a bit. Didn't recognize it as a moon. Seems like the moon shape needs to be refined a bit anyway. Only other things that throw me are the inner shape in the ear and the two large triangle shapes below the ear. Those don't match the rest of the line work to me...
Good idea and overall execution.
over 1 year ago
This is already a very nice concept.
Didn't see moon at first also. Definitely needs more work. But I saw wolf at first glance. Nice!
over 1 year ago
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Mackey Saturday
Great critique Travis! Thank you! I'm going to address and work through your suggestions. I appreciate your eye and input. And thank you Andrea. Conclusively, the moon definitely needs more work!
over 1 year ago
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Michael Spitz
Sweet stuff Mackey! Good point by Travis on the Moon. Dig it a lot! :)
over 1 year ago
This is such a cool concept, can't wait to see it with the changes.
over 1 year ago
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by Mackey Saturday
Refined the moon/upper ampersand and fur shapes. Thoughts?
over 1 year ago