My portfolio website is finally online. Make me happy and have a look at
Big thanks to Brankic1979 for his great wordpress theme.
11 months ago
hey @Brankic1979 ! look what I´ve done with your great theme! www.srioz.com
@Martin David You be happy now! xD
Now for what we are here: constructive criticism.
I just wanted to say, that I have really enjoyed scrolling through the site and I love how it looks on my iPhone 5 :P
But there are some things I wanted to make you aware of, too:
First would be the logo: I admit you need to create an "filename"@2x version to make it retina-ready ;)
Secondly I'd suggest to think about the font used in the header ("I love all kinds..." and "Let's push..."), because I'm not sure about that font (just my opinion) - maybe have a look at Intro.
The third point would be the spacing between the headers: Maybe a little more for better readability?
My next thought was regarding the yellow border displayed behind the current site - did you try how rounded broders look?
I made a small view of those four points for you ;)
Hope I could give some advice!
Enjoy your week :)
thanks a lot @Finn !!
Yeah the logo! As you know I´m not a great coder but I noticed the bug on retina devices and just found a script to autodetect if there is a retina display. I hope I´m able to include that.
font: I know that intro font and love it but I just wanted to use only two fonts on the site. Because I love how the menu looks with that font I decided to keep them.
The spacing: yeah you are maybe right, I´ll try!
The highlighted menu: FINN I´M EDGY ;-)
Thanks for your constructive criticism, you know I apreciate that a lot.
@Finn I forgot: I also need to find a way for mobile devices to make the pages menu looks like on the desktop version. but havnt found the key sofar.
@Martin David I'm glad you are so happy with your design and I definitely don't want to interfere then!
I know you are edgy - was the same thought I had in mind when writing that tip :D
I hope the script works out for you and I could have a look at the pages menu, if you want.
@Finn you never interfere bro;-)
sure finn! it would be great, if you are able to help me with the menu. you know what I mean? I dont want that dropdown menü there. I want to display every single page like on the desktop version. I also need to have a look if its possible to show the logo centered on mobile browsers.
@Martin David I would be very glad to help :)
I think I'd need access to your website then, do you wanna chat somewhere else like here or there?
@Finn great!! Lets talk on kickoff! maybe this weekend! I need to finish some stuff for my café customer first.
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