Christmas Coming Early Pt. Duex

10 Responses

1. Noah Stokes

   Coming soon.

   over 1 year ago

2. Joshua Blankenship

   The text box beside the call-to-action button... make it that darker blue so I have a very clear, very big visual to differentiate from the rest of the text.

   1likes

   over 1 year ago

3. Noah Stokes

   I had something like that, but it felt too heavy...

   over 1 year ago

4. Pro Chandler Van De Water

   Also, Try to fill out the top right corner, maybe by using AN (white) IPAD (dark blue).

   over 1 year ago

5. Joshua Blankenship

   Heavy = Wanna Click It

   1likes

   over 1 year ago

6. Pro Pat Dryburgh

   What about making it a white background with darker text?

   over 1 year ago

7. Pro Phil Coffman

   Couple things about the copywriting aren't sitting well with me. "Not" and "Value" are so big I read them together and that throws a negative spin on the whole deal for me. Plus the area title of "Show me were to sign" becomes repetitive when it's included in the line of copy before the CTA. That area is also a little tight. I'd prefer more breathing room like you have around "Tis the Season!"

   1likes

   over 1 year ago

8. Noah Stokes

   Just noticed that myself about the NOT and VALUE... good spot.

   over 1 year ago

9. Pro Chris Bowler

   Mr. Coffman has planted a bug in my office and is echoing my internal feedback!

   1likes

   over 1 year ago

10. Pro Henry Moran

    It's hard to read. Not enough contrast since you are using two light colors.

    over 1 year ago