Share The Love v.2

5 Responses

1. Jeremy Paul Beasley

   Still working at it. Client logo will go in the circle above the "S". Lots of smooth curves to be worked out. Open to ANY critique for you script experts out there.

   5 months ago

2. Brice Beasley

   I am basically the opposite of a "script expert," but the only thing that stands out to me is that swash / loop that crosses the top part of the "Sh." I understand the need for something there to balance out the lockup, but it's kind of confusing the read on the "S." When I blur my eyes I want to read it as "Th" instead of "Sh." Maybe you could remove it and then do something with the top loop of the "h" to fill out that area? Overall it's looking right nice.

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   5 months ago

3. Joshua Stipancic

   Digging this overall, but a few things caught my eye.

   The "a" in "Share" seems out of proportion compared to the rest of the letters. It's a bit too wide and laid back, whereas the rest are thinner and more vertical.

   The second thing is probably more personal, but I can't stand it when letters connect in unnatural ways UNLESS it serves some purpose. The "re" seems very forced as the stroke from the "r" is not continuous into the "e" (in contrast, the "ve" is much smoother).

   Particularly love the "th" and the symmetry in the top loops of the "Sh"

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   5 months ago

4. Jeremiah Wingett

   Great potential! Would love to see more progress.

   5 months ago

5. Karli Ingersoll

   looks like you are on the right track! love the layout so far.

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   5 months ago