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Working on an email thing

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10 Responses

  1. Pro Meagan-6 Meagan Fisher

    I'm trying to channel Anthropologie here, but I'm not sure if that's working out. I can't tell if this is the worst thing ever or not.

    about 2 years ago

  2. Pro 8d33ec29-02ff-4895-820f-58b57ec1eeff Ali Ali

    That is some sexy pixel perfection. I love it!

    about 2 years ago

  3. Pro Liam Liam McKay

    Beautiful work, one small thing, the main content text & title seem a little close to the side. Maybe it's just me, but in this small shot, it feels like it could do with a bit more space.

    Still love it though!

    about 2 years ago

  4. Pro Me James ✌

    I like a lot of aspects. Got a few changes that you might like to consider :)

    Firstly, I'd lose the pattern on the area where the text is, I think it clashes a tad with the background. Secondly, perhaps move the text "Hello Dear..." and "One Morning, when Gregor..." to the right about 10 pixels or so, looks a bit close to the edge.

    Lastly, align the "Our monthly newsletter" text with the text below it. Then I think things will look awesome. :)

    about 2 years ago

  5. Screen shot 2012-03-08 at 11 Aaron Irizarry

    Definitely not the worst thing ever... that monthly newsletter banner is awesome... the background behind the main text might be just a bit much... lessen it just a smidge.

    Awesome as always

    about 2 years ago

  6. Pro Tumblr_lqwk84y3vo1qzu15ho1_1280 Tyler Galpin

    /agreed about more space

    Maybe also move the ribbon a little downwards as the horizontal lines are all I see when my eye tracks over it

    about 2 years ago

  7. Pro Av_maykel_nov2010_200 Maykel Loomans

    Digging the patterns and attention to detail! Will stand in line with the folks that agree on somewhat more space on the left. :)

    about 2 years ago

  8. Eddit_2 Eddie Wilson

    Really digging it, BUT if you're going for that Anthropology thing you gotta get a bit more organic/eclectic, like their in store displays.

    about 2 years ago

  9. Pro Dribbble Jesse Gardner

    Just an idea, but I'd increase the size of the ribbon 1px to convey visually the idea that it's sitting on top of paper, maybe even a 1px shadow beneath it.

    about 2 years ago

  10. Pro Avatar Eddie Machado

    gorgeous

    about 2 years ago

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