Beautiful work, one small thing, the main content text & title seem a little close to the side. Maybe it's just me, but in this small shot, it feels like it could do with a bit more space.
I like a lot of aspects. Got a few changes that you might like to consider :)
Firstly, I'd lose the pattern on the area where the text is, I think it clashes a tad with the background. Secondly, perhaps move the text "Hello Dear..." and "One Morning, when Gregor..." to the right about 10 pixels or so, looks a bit close to the edge.
Lastly, align the "Our monthly newsletter" text with the text below it. Then I think things will look awesome. :)
Definitely not the worst thing ever... that monthly newsletter banner is awesome... the background behind the main text might be just a bit much... lessen it just a smidge.
Just an idea, but I'd increase the size of the ribbon 1px to convey visually the idea that it's sitting on top of paper, maybe even a 1px shadow beneath it.
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Meagan Fisher
I'm trying to channel Anthropologie here, but I'm not sure if that's working out. I can't tell if this is the worst thing ever or not.
about 2 years ago
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Ali Ali
That is some sexy pixel perfection. I love it!
about 2 years ago
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Liam McKay
Beautiful work, one small thing, the main content text & title seem a little close to the side. Maybe it's just me, but in this small shot, it feels like it could do with a bit more space.
Still love it though!
about 2 years ago
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James ✌
I like a lot of aspects. Got a few changes that you might like to consider :)
Firstly, I'd lose the pattern on the area where the text is, I think it clashes a tad with the background. Secondly, perhaps move the text "Hello Dear..." and "One Morning, when Gregor..." to the right about 10 pixels or so, looks a bit close to the edge.
Lastly, align the "Our monthly newsletter" text with the text below it. Then I think things will look awesome. :)
about 2 years ago
Definitely not the worst thing ever... that monthly newsletter banner is awesome... the background behind the main text might be just a bit much... lessen it just a smidge.
Awesome as always
about 2 years ago
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Tyler Galpin
/agreed about more space
Maybe also move the ribbon a little downwards as the horizontal lines are all I see when my eye tracks over it
about 2 years ago
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Maykel Loomans
Digging the patterns and attention to detail! Will stand in line with the folks that agree on somewhat more space on the left. :)
about 2 years ago
Really digging it, BUT if you're going for that Anthropology thing you gotta get a bit more organic/eclectic, like their in store displays.
about 2 years ago
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Jesse Gardner
Just an idea, but I'd increase the size of the ribbon 1px to convey visually the idea that it's sitting on top of paper, maybe even a 1px shadow beneath it.
about 2 years ago
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Eddie Machado
gorgeous
about 2 years ago