Solid design! Great use of white space, iconography, and section separators!
My only two gripes I have that you might want to try out:
– Vertically align the pricing so that the center "Recommended Plan" looks like it's more popped out towards you – rather than it being longer than the others.
– The orange border under the footer headings look a bit odd to me. What if you use a version of the dotted separators, but in a dark (or light) blue?
I'd darken the background in input fields in the footer, and I'd also revise the color of icons in the "We help you invest..." section. Saturated dark blue doesn't look quite right. I'd desaturate and lighten it a bit.
These are minor nitpicks though. Overall looks very good as is.
Classy. The photo / site title / buttons section at the top is great. I'd say you made your sale right there. I'm sure you can improve other bits of the page as per the other comments here, but first impressions go a long way.
I'm not sure I follow you with regards to the pricing table. Do you mean simply have them all the same height? At the moment I'm not even sure of the content the options will offer.
I'll definitely take a look at the orange dividers, you may well be right.
thanks @Alex Pankratov I think if I go with @Brent Galloway 's feedback then I might try and match up the colour of the icons to the footer dividers', a lighter blue perhaps. I'll have a play around with that.
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Nathan Powell
Moving further along with the landing page. Took @shawnHooghkirk 's advice about the title font, not sure...its better.
Full pixels here
Cheers
4 months ago
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Gijs Rogé
This is really professionally done dude, so good..
4 months ago
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Nathan Powell
blush :) Thanks @Gijs Rogé
4 months ago
nice work Nathan :)
4 months ago
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Nathan Powell
Thanks @Andrey S. Rodrigues
4 months ago
Hey, very nice job.
Following your lead with the serif type, here's my angle on it: http://s.graticle.com/zUVV
Obviously my opinion, so feel free to ignore :)
4 months ago
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Brent Galloway
Solid design! Great use of white space, iconography, and section separators!
My only two gripes I have that you might want to try out:
– Vertically align the pricing so that the center "Recommended Plan" looks like it's more popped out towards you – rather than it being longer than the others.
– The orange border under the footer headings look a bit odd to me. What if you use a version of the dotted separators, but in a dark (or light) blue?
Great work overall! :)
4 months ago
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Alex Pankratov
I'd darken the background in input fields in the footer, and I'd also revise the color of icons in the "We help you invest..." section. Saturated dark blue doesn't look quite right. I'd desaturate and lighten it a bit.
These are minor nitpicks though. Overall looks very good as is.
4 months ago
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Ted Goas
Classy. The photo / site title / buttons section at the top is great. I'd say you made your sale right there. I'm sure you can improve other bits of the page as per the other comments here, but first impressions go a long way.
4 months ago
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Nathan Powell
@Brent Galloway Hey brent, many thanks for your feedback.
I'm not sure I follow you with regards to the pricing table. Do you mean simply have them all the same height? At the moment I'm not even sure of the content the options will offer.
I'll definitely take a look at the orange dividers, you may well be right.
Cheers
4 months ago
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Nathan Powell
thanks @Alex Pankratov I think if I go with @Brent Galloway 's feedback then I might try and match up the colour of the icons to the footer dividers', a lighter blue perhaps. I'll have a play around with that.
Cheers, much appreciated.
4 months ago
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Nathan Powell
You don't know how much of a confidence boost your comment gave me @Ted Goas It's sincerely appreciated.
Cheers!
4 months ago
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Brent Galloway
@Nathan Powell Here's an example of what I was talking about for the pricing table: http://dribbble.com/shots/551821-Pricing-Page/attachments/40897
How it's popped out towards the viewer rather than just longer in length. But honestly, it looks great how it is :)
4 months ago
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Nathan Powell
@Brent Galloway ah, I see...hmm I'll have a think about it. Cheers
4 months ago
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B2B Landing Page (rebound)
by Nathan Powell
After great feedback from @Shawn Hooghkirk @Brent Galloway @Alex Pankratov @Ted Goas I made some minor adjustments.
Full pixels here
The client's happy and so am I :)
Cheers all!
4 months ago