Got a crazy turnaround ask today from a client. Working on some type for Valentine's Day. I have no clue what I'm doing so any critique would be appreciated!
Looking good, I'd probably pay attention on the kerning for the a-r and resolve the way how L-S relate. Probably raise the stem of L to curl through a and raise the base line altogether, thicken the horizontal line for L so it won't read Jove
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Got a crazy turnaround ask today from a client. Working on some type for Valentine's Day. I have no clue what I'm doing so any critique would be appreciated!
4 months ago
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Bobby Haiqalsyah
Looking good, I'd probably pay attention on the kerning for the a-r and resolve the way how L-S relate. Probably raise the stem of L to curl through a and raise the base line altogether, thicken the horizontal line for L so it won't read Jove
4 months ago
maybe try to integrate the Share and Love more so that they are connected. I think that will communicate what the message says more strongly.
then make every letter out of hearts. jk.
4 months ago
Perfect.
4 months ago
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Tobia Crivellari
Love this typo! Can't wait to see the final one mate! @Jeremy Paul Beasley
4 months ago
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Kristina Bartosova
It looks really nice! I would try to make the upper swirl from L bigger and the lower smaller, that should do.
4 months ago
Simple but meaningful meaning and nice sketch! Love the raw feeling.
4 months ago
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Matt Redway
bollocks. you know exactly what you're doing ;)
4 months ago