Batman

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1. Brody Vercher

   Trying something a little different this time; I’m starting with a content page on a website redesign.

   4 months ago

2. Pro David Stinnette

   Looking nice. I love the contrast you're getting with the yellow on black. Two small critiques: 1) I'd like to see your logo and the first thumbnail align - there is small misalignment now 2) Try putting a third line of text with your icon - I think you'll find that you need to adjust your leading a bit to make a third line fit comfortably in that space.

   I'd love to see the full screen a bit bigger - looks nice and balanced though. Nice work.

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   4 months ago

3. Pro Christophe Tauziet

   +1 with @David. Great work

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   4 months ago

4. Brody Vercher

   @David Stinnette Good call on both accounts. I may increase the size of the thumbnail to match a third line of text since I use the same text style/leading in various places throughout the page.

   I appreciate the feedback.

   4 months ago

5. Pro David Stinnette

   @Brody Vercher Glad I could help. I'd love to see more as you keep working through it.

   4 months ago

6. Revised Batman Article... The background here is just to accentuate the page, the actual background will be a large image or flat color. Check it out @2x.

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   Revised Batman Article Page

   by Brody Vercher

   The background here is just to accentuate the page, the actual background will be a large image or flat color. Check it out @2x.

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   4 months ago