Version 2. Thanks for the comments everyone. This version is a bit softer and now in one tone.
As stated before, a WIP for a church. Showing the four main visions of the church: worship, serving, discipleship, and relationship that are going beyond the walls of the church building. Negative space forms a cross in the center. It's always a challenge to bring something fresh to the world of Church logos...
No worries man - the mark is great! One thing I just noticed... IMO the lines that form the cross hint at the shape of a swash sticker. I think this can be avoided if you mirror the right side of the mark against the left. What do you think? Am I seeing things?
Looks good. The only thing off to me is the corners on the diamond, the inside radius doesn't match the outer so it makes the corners feel a little weaker.
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Version 2. Thanks for the comments everyone. This version is a bit softer and now in one tone.
As stated before, a WIP for a church. Showing the four main visions of the church: worship, serving, discipleship, and relationship that are going beyond the walls of the church building. Negative space forms a cross in the center. It's always a challenge to bring something fresh to the world of Church logos...
5 months ago
@dan fleming, good eye. Thanks for the heads up.
5 months ago
nice logo
5 months ago
A million times better! This really has a 'church' feel to it. No more Heavy Metal/Dubstell aggressiveness. :)
5 months ago
No worries man - the mark is great! One thing I just noticed... IMO the lines that form the cross hint at the shape of a swash sticker. I think this can be avoided if you mirror the right side of the mark against the left. What do you think? Am I seeing things?
5 months ago
Looks good. The only thing off to me is the corners on the diamond, the inside radius doesn't match the outer so it makes the corners feel a little weaker.
5 months ago
like the concept and great improvement compared with earlier version, its more inviting ;-)
5 months ago