Super DNA Logo

8 Responses

1. Pro Breno Bitencourt

   Hey guys, Feedback on it is very appreciated. Work in progress for a very interesting project for cancer cure researching, more details about it soon. :)))

   5 months ago

2. Pro Michael Spitz

   Really like where this is going bud.

   Wondering how you might makes the ends terminate more definitively, to make sure the helix doesn't just read as a ribbon. The center reads very clearly as is, but I'm thinking maybe the outside curves should connect without the breaks, not sure?

   Sort of akin to how cartoons are typically drawn > with a solid outline, and finer internal lines that define the details...

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   5 months ago

3. Pro Richard de Ruijter

   Man i love this feel, and i have no idea how to explain what i think can be improved, but bear with me.

   Right now it feels like a ladder made from jello, very curvy and flexible, but very energetic too. the S is obviously very nice and the energetic feel of the piece adds to the "Super" part.

   What i'm really missing is how these "strings" of DNA kind of... intertwine, like } to { you kind of see that in the middle part of the S, but nowhere else... maybe on top a little, but not enough yet, for my feel.

   All in all i think you are very close, but not really there.. yet, Can't wait to see this piece evolve!

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   5 months ago

4. Pro Lucas Tarasconi

   Very interesting concept but agree with previous comments, I thinks the DNA is to crushed in the vertical align and also that the two string of DNA not wrap enough and people can think that is just a ladder.

   But I love your idea.

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   5 months ago

5. John Kane Smith

   This is rad.

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   5 months ago

6. Pro Sean Tremaine

   Very cool...I think i agree with what @Michael Spitz said about the outside lines connecting

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   5 months ago

7. Pro Jure Tovrljan

   Amazing, Breno.

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   5 months ago

8. Pro Breno Bitencourt

   Thanks @Jure Tovrljan, @Sean Tremaine, @John Kane Smith, @Lucas Tarasconi, @Richard de Ruijter and @Michael Spitz.

   I'm discussing everything with the client for now, and will surely consider all this feedback. Maybe it could be redirected for another project as well, since fits well in other possible project of the same client. :))))

   Thanks gents!

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   5 months ago