The Heart of the Matter

5 Responses

1. Kate Farrar

   Working on something for a new sermon series. Would really love some feedback on this. Does the thin type go with the bold heart? Thanks!

   @Travis any thoughts?

   4 months ago

2. Pro Travis Ladue

   I think the heart is overpowering the type. I also think it feels 'empty' right now. I don't think there is enough content visually to grab my attention. I would make the heart and the type visually equal so the type doesn't fall so far back.

   4 months ago

3. Kate Farrar

   @Travis yeah i agree with you...gonna take another pass at it. thanks! :)

   4 months ago

4. Pro Mike Giles

   Agreed. If this were reduced in size at all the text has the potential to become illegible. But I like where it's going. Nice work.

   4 months ago

5. Kate Farrar

   Thanks @Mike! Appreciate your feedback. :)

   4 months ago