over 1 year ago
Hey Becca, lookin good, perhaps the transitions of the thin strokes into the stems of the letters could be smoother? I'd also consider leaving the upstroke from the bottom of the i up into the e the same thin lineweight, having weight there wouldn't happen if you were writing this. Perhaps the top of the h could be longer and lose the loop? The last thing I'd watch is the spacing between the y-l-i compared to the h-i-t, should prob be the same! Look forward to seeing the final.
i like it!
Thanks, @Dave Foster, I'll definitely work that feedback into my revisions!
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