54 Responses (page 1 of 3)

  1. Kerem Suer Kerem Suer

    Feedback is welcomed.

    over 1 year ago

  2. Alex Pankratov Alex Pankratov

    Zoom out a bit more. It's still too big.

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    over 1 year ago

  3. Roman Bulah Roman Bulah

    looks nice and clean, but pretty hard to say smth more, because it's too small.

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    over 1 year ago

  4. Kerem Suer Kerem Suer

    Maybe I want you to focus on the layout, architecture and the use of space and not the style, treatments, etc.?

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    over 1 year ago

  5. Victor Erixon Victor Erixon

    What the rest said, but as I can see how you divided things - the elements look's nicely aligned and divided.

    over 1 year ago

  6. Samuel Couto Samuel Couto

    Agree with the small preview, but right out 'the bat I'd say the imagery you had on the previous site had a much more welcome feeling than the current one. But again... small previw - it's hard to say.

    over 1 year ago

  7. Zane David Zane David

    Love the structure Kerem, a nice upgrade!

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    over 1 year ago

  8. Justin Edmund Justin Edmund

    Watching Dribbble struggle with critiquing actual design and not drop shadows is entertaining. Continue.

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    over 1 year ago

  9. Finbarrs Oketunji Finbarrs Oketunji

    Good use of white space. I like it. Might want to share a zoomed-in version.

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    over 1 year ago

  10. Ismet Ismet

    @Kerem Suer Maybe to replace those 2 boring text paragraphs with something fun? I don't know, but don't like a lot of text on homepages like this :)

    /2¢

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    over 1 year ago

  11. Michiel de Graaf Michiel de Graaf

    I think it's hard to say something about the layout and architecture without being able to read the content and thus understanding what you want to communicate on this page.

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    over 1 year ago

  12. Jonathan Belton Jonathan Belton

    I like it Kerem, that text is quite heavy though - is it going to be an article, or introduction? if it's the latter I think it may be asking a lot of visitors.

    over 1 year ago

  13. Haziq Mir Haziq Mir

    The header is throwing me off. Not sure why. Try playing with your head.

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    over 1 year ago

  14. Damian Hernandez Damian Hernandez

    Agree with @Ismet ...something more fun and concise will get the work done :)

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    over 1 year ago

  15. Aziz Firat Aziz Firat

    New site.. new picture maybe?

    over 1 year ago

  16. Kerem Suer Kerem Suer

    @Ismet @Damian this is not the home page though, it's the profile page, where I will be talking about myself, hence the text heavy approach.

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    over 1 year ago

  17. Ismet Ismet

    @Kerem Suer That's something else then ;)

    over 1 year ago

  18. Mel Hogan Mel Hogan

    @Kerem Suer I think the rhythm of the smaller elements on the page work well to lead your eye through the content. The combination of staccato and legato placement from top to bottom adds a bouncy, fun effect to what could be a dull layout. In addition, the overall funneling of the eye towards the bottom brings the layout to a pleasing resolution.

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    over 1 year ago

  19. Roy Abbink Roy Abbink

    @Kerem Suer: The layout of the content gets more narrow when you scroll down. I've drawn some lines over your shot to explain what I mean. Right now it's shaped like a cone, I'd go with a more hourglassish shape.

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    over 1 year ago

  20. Kerem Suer Kerem Suer

    @Stackify appreciate the feedback.

    @Roy Abbink thanks for the feedback, it looks like an upside down bat :) You're right about the hourglassish shape, and I think the part you're not seeing might actually achieve that. Thanks for taking the time.

    over 1 year ago

  21. Roy Abbink Roy Abbink

    @Kerem Suer Your welcome. I'm curious at a 'real pixels' view of your website. When will it go live?

    over 1 year ago

  22. Johan Bakken Johan Bakken

    @Kerem Suer: Looks very nice. Curious to hear how the header area will behave when scrolling the page.

    over 1 year ago

  23. Angel Jiménez Lopez Angel Jiménez Lopez

    I really like the layout is very concise It does is purpose quite right!

    over 1 year ago

  24. John Howard John Howard

    @Alex Pankratov 's comment made me spit my drink out and I wasn't drinking anything.

    over 1 year ago

  25. Ted Goas Ted Goas

    Love the header... the log and navigation feel at home with the photo. Zoomed all the way out, I'm not sure I'd read those two side by side paragraphs. I might, but it looks like a lot and and I might abandon them for the shiny below.

    over 1 year ago

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