Lustra Logo WIP

12 Responses

1. Pro Tim Smith

   Work in progress for a new project. Thoughts?

   5 months ago

2. Pro Kelly Walker

   Great colors!

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   5 months ago

3. Pro Tim Smith

   Thanks @Kelly Walker :)

   5 months ago

4. Pro David Silva

   What is Lustra?

   5 months ago

5. Joshua Luciano

   Dude, I diggs!

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   5 months ago

6. Pro Tim Smith

   @David Silva - Can't say yet. Very excited about it :)

   @Joshua Luciano - Thanks!

   5 months ago

7. Pro Kuba Stanek

   Lustra means mirrors in Polish :) Nice work!

   5 months ago

8. Pro James Wilson

   I like the feel of it. The clean serif font against the curves of the folksy badge has a nice contrast. I would suggest you do some hand work fixing the strokes from skewing the text. You can notice it mostly in the curved strokes, like the arcs of the "s" and bowls of the "u" and "a". It's the same issue faux italics suffer from, and it's not instantly noticeable, but fixing it will push the design up a notch.

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   5 months ago

9. Pro David Silva

   lol ok. I was just trying to get something to compare it to and see how appropriate it is. But I like it as is. The badge shape goes nicely with that font.

   @James Wilson Good eye, because I can't see it :(

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   5 months ago

10. Pro James Wilson

    @David Silva Here's a zoomed in image w/ some highlights where to look http://cl.ly/Luzt

    The bowl of the "u" and "a" is slightly thicker than it'd normally be, and it's especially noticeable on the "u" (look at the way it juts out sharply). The "a" isn't as noticeable but it's still there. On the "s" the finials have a slight hook to on the interior edge of the stroke because the arc has been thinned.

    They're really small details and a real typographer would probably be able to pick up more, but I'm just an amateur at best.

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    5 months ago

11. Lustra 2 WIP Tried fixing some of the stroke weight issues that @James Wilson pointed out but, I don't seem to have a good eye for it. Would love any more feedback!

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    Lustra 2 WIP

    by Tim Smith

    Tried fixing some of the stroke weight issues that @James Wilson pointed out but, I don't seem to have a good eye for it. Would love any more feedback!

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    5 months ago

12. Erik Binggeser

    It's pretty basic and doesn't give much hint about what it's trying to represent. Thus, not sure if it's a good solution.

    5 months ago