I agree with @Bill S Kenney and @Jared Granger I think for me; it seems heavier to the right side. had this idea http://d.pr/i/nSbY/4XU13T1w but didn't want nor, do I want to look like an A-hole for posting it. so don't think that!!
@Nick Jarvis@Sean Farrell Excellent mark man. I saw the question mark right away. It really depends on the brand and what they are looking for. If subtle/artsy is better than this work (with some cleaning up). If they want blatant then probably another round is due. Nick, you said you felt like a 'tool' haha... made me laugh. Thank God we can actually use dribbble to communicate better ways to do things on here. Nobody critiques well anymore. Good job to both of you.
I immediately see the question mark. Isn't it interesting how different people see things so differently? BTW, I really how you matched the slope of the inside of the question mark's hook to the stroke to its right.
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Sean Farrell
WIP question mark/ lightning bolt mark.
5 months ago
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Jeremiah Adkins
I dig it. It starts to look like an ear after a while.
5 months ago
Cool idea, but I don't know if I would have gotten the question mark.
5 months ago
strong
5 months ago
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Victor Erixon
This is good.
5 months ago
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Bill S Kenney
I got it but something seems off. Not sure what it is just yet.
5 months ago
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Mads Roland
My first thought, was also an ear!
5 months ago
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Jared Granger
I'm with @Bill S Kenney , something seems a bit off when its larger, but smaller I saw the question mark right away.
5 months ago
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Seth Louey
Interesting concept, but i have to agree with these other creatives... something is off.
5 months ago
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Nick Jarvis
I agree with @Bill S Kenney and @Jared Granger I think for me; it seems heavier to the right side. had this idea http://d.pr/i/nSbY/4XU13T1w but didn't want nor, do I want to look like an A-hole for posting it. so don't think that!!
5 months ago
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Sean Farrell
@Nick Jarvis Looks great man!
5 months ago
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Nick Jarvis
it's just a thought, I mean, i felt like a total tool even putting it up.
5 months ago
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Win Lin
I want to see something in the negative space of the upper piece, maybe there's an opportunity for something there?
5 months ago
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Bryan Kearney
Good idea... needs to be "curvy-er" I think. Like this: http://www.google.com/webfonts/specimen/Bitter
Make sense?
5 months ago
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John Howard
@Nick Jarvis @Sean Farrell Excellent mark man. I saw the question mark right away. It really depends on the brand and what they are looking for. If subtle/artsy is better than this work (with some cleaning up). If they want blatant then probably another round is due. Nick, you said you felt like a 'tool' haha... made me laugh. Thank God we can actually use dribbble to communicate better ways to do things on here. Nobody critiques well anymore. Good job to both of you.
5 months ago
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Michael P. Hill
I immediately see the question mark. Isn't it interesting how different people see things so differently? BTW, I really how you matched the slope of the inside of the question mark's hook to the stroke to its right.
5 months ago
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Sean Farrell
Thanks for the critique guys. Thus the WIP mention. Love having some more sets of eyes to look at it.
5 months ago
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Dangerdom
Very cool! I saw the question mark right away too, but folks have good suggestions.
5 months ago
Nice work as always!
5 months ago
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Andy Chipperfield
Is it for Harry Potter Jeopardy? :) I first saw a coat hanger, then an ear, then a question mark. Maybe that says more about me though.
5 months ago
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Nick Jarvis
thanks @John Howard!
5 months ago
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Eelco Guntlisbergen
Looks fantastic! I also saw the ear first.
I think why it looks off is because of the dot that isn't aligned with the top object but that could be me.
Great inspiration.
5 months ago