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17 Responses

1. Doug Penick

   T-Shirt design for a rad little company @Jay Roberts set me up with... Thoughts?

   It's built around the story of the Prodigal Son.

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   6 months ago

2. Laura Bohill

   I think the type should have more weight than the lines surrounding, but maybe only slightly. Other than that, totally RAD! Beautiful lines and texture!

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   6 months ago

3. Marc Burmich

   Is the font hand drawn?

   6 months ago

4. Doug Penick

   @Marc Burmich Kinda sorta... I drew it by hand, but it's pretty much exactly United Sans.

   6 months ago

5. Nicholas D'Amico

   @Doug Penick I agree with @Laura Bohill maybe thicken the stronger up to create a little depth. Whats the significants with the animals?

   6 months ago

6. Scott Hill

   I think it's perfect. Don't change anything.

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   6 months ago

7. Richard de Ruijter

   @Nicholas D'Amico i suppose the animals relate to the part of the story where the prodigal son has spent all his money and finds himself working for a boss, feeding pigs, and realising those pigs get better food than he can get himself... not sure though.

   6 months ago

8. Doug Penick

   @Richard de Ruijter @Nicholas D'Amico yessir, and the young calf at the bottom for the meal that the father prepares at the son's return home.

   6 months ago

9. Doug Penick

   @Scott Hill thanks dude! That's pretty swell feedback

   6 months ago

10. Richard de Ruijter

    @Doug Penick ah yea, got it, suppose i saw little importance in the calf, so it didn't connect with me right away, i just figured he might have herded calfs too.

    Forgot to mention, i really like it, but if you're pointing out the strenght of the word stronger i think it would do well to make it a bit bolder.

    6 months ago

11. Zach Hink

    Man, this is pretty fantastic!

    6 months ago

12. Jay Roberts

    Love this, Doug!

    6 months ago

13. becky murphy

    Can't get over this. Love it.

    6 months ago

14. Jeremy Teff

    Nice man, nice.

    6 months ago

15. Skyler Westby

    I love it. But I agree with the "bolder" people

    6 months ago

16. Tom Chalky

    this is really nice. (y)

    6 months ago

17. Andrew Colin Beck

    Very nice.

    6 months ago