Working on the final version of Segal Holdings logo. I just put a custom type that I'm not sure if it's looking good or need some retouches yet, I'll really appreciate a help on it*. Also, we're going with this color for now. Let me know your thoughs guys.
*the negative version have no compensation yet, so I think you better judge the positive one. :D
Thank you, and a happy new year for everyone! :))))
6 months ago
Love the direction of the type Breno! Something with the A feels a bit off... Unbalanced if you will. The right side feels a bit heavier-the axis visually looks a bit more tilted if that makes sense.
I think the type looks great, but maybe just a little bit softer corners in a few select places would tie it to the logo just a bit more?
O ícone está BEM melhor!
A tipografia, no entanto, merece um cuidado maior. Não achei que está combinando. : /
Looks good Breno. Nice.
I love the evolution of the mark - now it stays strong, but at the same time it has this light flow. Great job!
the right wing looks too bold and heavy compared to the left imo. maybe it should be more dynamic :) despite that – have u tried a non italic font? :D
This is because the earlier version haven't this wing fold that suggest a bird body. So I've planned it without the fold. Now I have to redo this proportion. Thanks, @Konstantin! :)
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