It has a lot of weight and style. I love it! Maybe add a stroke to it with a bright color of make it white with some real dramatic messy color paint behind it. Nice work dude.
@Kyle Chicoine@Dave Gates Thanks duders. Kyle, took your advice and made it my player card! Dave, I'd like to jazz this guy up too in the future, who knows where it will go!
Lots of potential in this one. The curve on the leg of the R has a really nice natural flow. But the middle part of the word feels a bit squashed and i'm not sure about the flourish on the last L.
Thanks for the feedback @Dan (Hypagraphic) however I think the "squashed" nature of the type is cohesive throughout. All of the characters are working in unison. The swash on the L compliments the curvy baseline of the type.
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Playing around with my brush pen and came up with this little ditty.
5 months ago
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Kyle Chicoine
Should make this your new logo. :)
5 months ago
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Dave Gates
It has a lot of weight and style. I love it! Maybe add a stroke to it with a bright color of make it white with some real dramatic messy color paint behind it. Nice work dude.
5 months ago
@Kyle Chicoine @Dave Gates Thanks duders. Kyle, took your advice and made it my player card! Dave, I'd like to jazz this guy up too in the future, who knows where it will go!
5 months ago
Lots of potential in this one. The curve on the leg of the R has a really nice natural flow. But the middle part of the word feels a bit squashed and i'm not sure about the flourish on the last L.
4 months ago
Thanks for the feedback @Dan (Hypagraphic) however I think the "squashed" nature of the type is cohesive throughout. All of the characters are working in unison. The swash on the L compliments the curvy baseline of the type.
3 months ago
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Michael Reilly
I really like this – great rhythm and character.
2 months ago