Christmas!

17 Responses

1. Sarah Mick

   Part of more work on a Christmas campaign. Still majorly a work in progress. Any suggestions/critiques are welcome! Kinda banging my head against the wall on this one...

   CHECK OUT THE REBOUND: http://dribbble.com/shots/87838-Christmas-Rebounded

   over 2 years ago

2. Sarah Mick

   Thanks so much Josh! I'm trying to work on the "Christmas Items" text, because I can't tell if it stands out enough...Might try white. :)

   over 2 years ago

3. Jessie Glass

   I agree with Jonathan. "Christmas Items" is clear as a bell, but "Shop Now and Save" and the percent sign could both use a little help standing out. At first look, I thought there were "25 christmas items," rather than 25% off.

   over 2 years ago

4. Sarah Mick

   Ahhh, I didn't think of it that way. Thanks a bunch, guys! Gonna work on your suggestions now.

   over 2 years ago

5. Kristen Ashton

   super lovely

   over 2 years ago

6. ▲Claudiu Ungureanu

   Yes, Sarah. Awesome! but also agree with Jonathan and Jessie. But these are small tweaks. The overall is great.

   over 2 years ago

7. Allison House!

   I also had to hunt for the "shop now" and percentage symbol, but oh my gosh this is so beautiful.

   over 2 years ago

8. Sarah Mick

   Thanks so much Kristin, Claudiu, and Allison! I just finished the final version. I'll post a rebound with everyone's suggestions later today!

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   over 2 years ago

9. Sascha Michael Trinkaus

   This is superb Sarah. Lovely colors and great badge-y style :)

   over 2 years ago

10. Danny Outlaw

    I dig the "merry christmas" border!

    over 2 years ago

11. Adam Smith

    Good God....

    over 2 years ago

12. Craig Stubblefield

    This is stunning! I agree with previous comments regarding text hierarchy. Also - perhaps the "bend" or "fold" of the ribbon could be slightly more rounded. It seemed a little to pointy to me with that style of shadow. Top work though - I'm drooling.

    over 2 years ago

13. Christmas - Rebounded! Here's the final version featuring some of the offer space at the bottom. Darkened the shop now and save as well as increased the size of the % per the sugge...

    Rebound

    Christmas - Rebounded!

    by Sarah Mick

    Here's the final version featuring some of the offer space at the bottom. Darkened the shop now and save as well as increased the size of the % per the suggestion of you guys!
    
    Thanks for the help! :)

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    over 2 years ago

14. Behzad Ghaffarian

    Well done, Sarah. I'm loving it so far... :)
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    over 2 years ago

15. Matthew Spiel

    sheesh. this is top notch... the depth on that 25 is amazing. great work!

    over 2 years ago

16. Sarah Mick

    Thanks Matthew! Just checked out your work and it's gorgeous! Just started following you :)

    over 2 years ago

17. Jason Harrop

    This is way awesome! Love it! :)

    over 2 years ago