Part of more work on a Christmas campaign. Still majorly a work in progress. Any suggestions/critiques are welcome! Kinda banging my head against the wall on this one...
CHECK OUT THE REBOUND: http://dribbble.com/shots/87838-Christmas-Rebounded
over 2 years ago
Thanks so much Josh! I'm trying to work on the "Christmas Items" text, because I can't tell if it stands out enough...Might try white. :)
I agree with Jonathan. "Christmas Items" is clear as a bell, but "Shop Now and Save" and the percent sign could both use a little help standing out. At first look, I thought there were "25 christmas items," rather than 25% off.
Ahhh, I didn't think of it that way. Thanks a bunch, guys! Gonna work on your suggestions now.
Yes, Sarah. Awesome! but also agree with Jonathan and Jessie. But these are small tweaks. The overall is great.
I also had to hunt for the "shop now" and percentage symbol, but oh my gosh this is so beautiful.
Thanks so much Kristin, Claudiu, and Allison! I just finished the final version. I'll post a rebound with everyone's suggestions later today!
This is superb Sarah. Lovely colors and great badge-y style :)
I dig the "merry christmas" border!
This is stunning! I agree with previous comments regarding text hierarchy. Also - perhaps the "bend" or "fold" of the ribbon could be slightly more rounded. It seemed a little to pointy to me with that style of shadow. Top work though - I'm drooling.
by Sarah Mick
Here's the final version featuring some of the offer space at the bottom. Darkened the shop now and save as well as increased the size of the % per the suggestion of you guys!
Thanks for the help! :)
over 2 years ago
Well done, Sarah. I'm loving it so far... :)
winter comes to dribbble :) http://drbl.in/Gue
sheesh. this is top notch... the depth on that 25 is amazing. great work!
Thanks Matthew! Just checked out your work and it's gorgeous! Just started following you :)
This is way awesome! Love it! :)
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