REBORN restoration company

17 Responses

1. Pro Caleb Royce Lummer

   Working on some preliminary ideas for an emerging brand. Suggestions are massively appreciated (as always). Cheers!

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   5 months ago

2. Peterson Timothy

   I'm loving what is going on here, can't wait to see more. The only thing i'm struggling with is the &. Kinda seems a bit out of place. Perhaps a different typeface choice?But I do love the Futura with the script, nice work. Also really diggin the American flag. Nice touch.

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   5 months ago

3. grégory kaz delaure

   agree with Peterson Timothy

   5 months ago

4. Pro Joshua Krohn

   Hey bud. It's a great start. Just a couple nit-picky things.

   That script is really hard for me to read. It took a couple passes to read it right. Your flag has fifteen stripes ;) Maybe make it with seven, thicker stripes...a more stylized flag instead of an actual representation.

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   5 months ago

5. Steve Silvas

   I agree with Joshua. The script is a super tough read for me.

   5 months ago

6. Pro Cat Smith

   I love how historical this entire piece feels. I'm really a fan. As everyone already pointed out though, the script should be changed even though I love that one. Obviously the viewer is more important though haha. The elements seem to be misaligned as well. Unless you didn't want to center them? And any reason you curved "in the united states of america" ? Maybe try making that straight?

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   5 months ago

7. Pro Joseph Marsh

   It's headed in the right direction for sure. I would suggest that it feels a bit on the busy side, plus everything looks very stacked on one another. I like Joshua's idea of less stripes on a more stylized flag (since you've already stylized it, plus it would cut down on visual clutter).

   I would also drop the "originally crafted and proudly restored" down with "in the United States of America" underneath the flag. And then maybe put the flag and the anvil on the same line with a thin vertical division line between the two.

   Just my two pennies :)

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   5 months ago

8. Pro Greg Christian

   we talking Texas here? That single star made me think so.

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   5 months ago

9. Pro Caleb Royce Lummer

   @Greg Christian haha, we gotta hang soon, dude.

   5 months ago

10. Pro Greg Christian

    @Caleb Royce Lummer duder next week lets kick it.

    5 months ago

11. Pro Maigen Sawyer

    I love this! Awesome job Caleb.

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    5 months ago

12. Pro Caleb Royce Lummer

    @Maigen Sawyer Thx Maigen!!

    5 months ago

13. Pro Guilherme Costa

    This looks stunning! Love the filter and the elements on the top of the picture. It works perfectly!

    5 months ago

14. Pro Caleb Royce Lummer

    @Peterson Timothy @Joshua Krohn @Joseph Marsh @Cat Smith you guys are awesome. thx for the great feedback. will be working on a revision to get your thoughts on. cheers!

    5 months ago

15. Namanyay Goel

    Amazing typography there, good photography too! Inspired! :D

    5 months ago

16. Peter Voth

    Man this is just awesome. Great!

    5 months ago

17. Pro Charles Patterson

    @Caleb Royce Lummer I love your work man! Everything looks great :)

    about 1 month ago