I love your work. But this one seems a bit off to me. The spacing between the lines are so similar that it makes me want to see some tighter leading in some places.
The W feels out of place. I think the outer stems need to be pushed in a bit on the baseline to better compliment the angled stems of the A. Otherwise looking nice.
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Oh Simon... Always with the B/W hotness... :)
over 2 years ago
Haha. Cheers Michael. Yeah, I think I'm in my black period.
over 2 years ago
Love the enclosure shape!
over 2 years ago
I love your work. But this one seems a bit off to me. The spacing between the lines are so similar that it makes me want to see some tighter leading in some places.
I dig the typestyle and the overall shape!
over 2 years ago
I love this, it's stunning all-around! I'm really digging the border lines.
over 2 years ago
Thanks Nathan, Steve for the feedback, and Hunter.
over 2 years ago
Love this man!
over 2 years ago
Really love this Simon-
The right legs of the "R" and "L" don't sit quite well with me. Would probably prefer to see those straight.
But seriously... this is slick. Looks like an old historical marker sign.
over 2 years ago
Anything needs a little grunge now and then..
over 2 years ago
Cheers all. Here's where I've ended up for now:
http://www.flickr.com/photos/32125239@N00/5229033037/
over 2 years ago
Well isn't that just fantastic?
over 2 years ago
yea nice unique enclosure shape!
over 2 years ago
The W feels out of place. I think the outer stems need to be pushed in a bit on the baseline to better compliment the angled stems of the A. Otherwise looking nice.
over 2 years ago
After perusing your feed, I'm now a fan. Great work sir.
over 2 years ago
Personal bias aside - this is freaking fantastic! It is so moody. And the texture brings it into full retro-life. So cool
over 2 years ago
Ha! Right on, Heath. Thanks all.
over 2 years ago