Part of a landing page for a site I'm currently working on.
5 months ago
text a bit hard to read, perhaps adding text shadow would helpful? Otherwise it's looking good :)
Yap, I adress about the text shadow
I like it the way it is :)
I like where it's going, but I'd consider some italic emphasis on either the "sell on your own" or "no credit card" text. I get the feeling it might draw attention to them a tad more. Just my opinion though!
@Joe Ellis or perhaps a hand-drawn underline? I'll think about it. Thanks.
@Pawel Kadysz Yes, possibly so! I think it was the difference in type on the ampersand brought the idea to mind.
Anyways, look forward to seeing a more complete version soon!
Looks really great. The background really blends. :)
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Pawel Kadysz
Part of a landing page for a site I'm currently working on.
5 months ago
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Kamal Chaneman
text a bit hard to read, perhaps adding text shadow would helpful?
Otherwise it's looking good :)
5 months ago
Yap, I adress about the text shadow
5 months ago
I like it the way it is :)
5 months ago
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Joe Ellis
I like where it's going, but I'd consider some italic emphasis on either the "sell on your own" or "no credit card" text. I get the feeling it might draw attention to them a tad more. Just my opinion though!
5 months ago
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Pawel Kadysz
@Joe Ellis or perhaps a hand-drawn underline? I'll think about it. Thanks.
5 months ago
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Joe Ellis
@Pawel Kadysz Yes, possibly so! I think it was the difference in type on the ampersand brought the idea to mind.
Anyways, look forward to seeing a more complete version soon!
5 months ago
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Dominik Martin
Looks really great. The background really blends. :)
5 months ago