Iterated this mark further after hearing everyone's comments and having a couple side chats with Aaron Martin and Gerren Lamson. I removed the outer stripe, thus simplifying the visual complexity of the whole thing. I also brought it down to 2 colors and changed up how the shapes interlocked, as well as having the outer "shield" lock into the two "S"s.
I'm really digging where this has ended up. Thanks again everyone for your feedback!
Trying out slightly thinner counters for the "S"s after feedback from the client. I like the "beefier" look this gives to the whole mark, but want to make sure it's still legible at smaller sizes. Thoughts?
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Phil Coffman
Iterated this mark further after hearing everyone's comments and having a couple side chats with Aaron Martin and Gerren Lamson. I removed the outer stripe, thus simplifying the visual complexity of the whole thing. I also brought it down to 2 colors and changed up how the shapes interlocked, as well as having the outer "shield" lock into the two "S"s.
I'm really digging where this has ended up. Thanks again everyone for your feedback!
over 1 year ago
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Strongspace Shield Colors
by Phil Coffman
Here are a few color options I've been exploring.
over 1 year ago
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Ismael Burciaga
I liked the colors you chose :)
over 1 year ago
Love where this ended up. Great job!
over 1 year ago
Liking this simplified version. Orange or green are my picks.
over 1 year ago
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Paul Armstrong
Yes. Yes. A few more times than that, yes.
over 1 year ago
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Michael Spitz
Looking good Phil. Solid mark.
over 1 year ago
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Bobby McKenna
This is so much stronger than before. Way to push.
over 1 year ago
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Gerren Lamson
Nicely done.
over 1 year ago
Rebound
Strongspace Shield Tweak
by Phil Coffman
Trying out slightly thinner counters for the "S"s after feedback from the client. I like the "beefier" look this gives to the whole mark, but want to make sure it's still legible at smaller sizes. Thoughts?
over 1 year ago