Lost & Confused WIP

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1. Pro Jess Wong

   Feelings, y'all!

   Pretty happy with composition of this one, and can't wait to finish it. Hopefully tomorrow.

   See attachment for the whole composition.

   5 months ago

2. Lost & Confused WIP 2 *please view full-size attachment* Yo, So I've been working on this but would love some help! I don't know what to do with the crossbar on the 'f'? I've tr...

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   Lost & Confused WIP 2

   by Jess Wong

   *please view full-size attachment*

   Yo,

   So I've been working on this but would love some help! I don't know what to do with the crossbar on the 'f'? I've tried a ligature from the 'u' but that looks odd as none of the other letters are joined and the spacing is quite generous. I could try one from the 'c', but I think it might throw off the balance of the composition...

   Also, does 'o' look better with only one thick stroke on the left (in 'confused') or with a thicker stroke on the right as well (in 'lost')? Does it look ok to have a smaller 'o' in 'lost', because the spiral on the 's' pushes it up? Or does that just look weird?

   Obviously, i haven't even started on the 'and' and my 's' is still pretty lumpy.

   Grateful for any tips :)

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   5 months ago