Pretty happy with composition of this one, and can't wait to finish it. Hopefully tomorrow.
See attachment for the whole composition.
5 months ago
by Jess Wong
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So I've been working on this but would love some help! I don't know what to do with the crossbar on the 'f'? I've tried a ligature from the 'u' but that looks odd as none of the other letters are joined and the spacing is quite generous. I could try one from the 'c', but I think it might throw off the balance of the composition...
Also, does 'o' look better with only one thick stroke on the left (in 'confused') or with a thicker stroke on the right as well (in 'lost')? Does it look ok to have a smaller 'o' in 'lost', because the spiral on the 's' pushes it up? Or does that just look weird?
Obviously, i haven't even started on the 'and' and my 's' is still pretty lumpy.
Grateful for any tips :)
5 months ago
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