Messing around with a monogram for myself...MJ - some reworking the cross/pencil element that @Gert van Duinen did for me a while back. I think the lead part of the pencil needs to be bigger - its getting lost. Anyway feedback & comments most welcomed.
12 months ago
Wow, this is sharp. Lots of elements to it, and it's still simple to look at. I agree with you, though, the lead on the pencil gets lost (I had to look for it).
Man that is awesome!!
So good @Mike! Would love to see a simplified version with just the 'MJ'. The only thing i would say is with that line opposite the top of the 'J', it could bring a 'U' to mind if you get me? Looks great though man!
Sweet! Love the spacing and how this logo is locked on a grid, very balanced and tidy... But maybe a little less detail would spice things up. Overall, it ROCKS!
Just great, man!
amazing work Sir!
Really dig this!
Looking beautiful, Mike!
You've been rockin' stuff lately!
thats so dope! I love it!
Like this a lot.
Many thanks to everyone!! - something fun I sketched out quickly to add to something. So in my hast I know it needs some work...lol!
@Doug Houvener Yeah bro - totally agree it needs to be much larger not to get lost in the mix. thx man!
@Olly Sorsby Ah bro! I didn't even see that. Good catch i jut had that piece there to add som symmetry. So just take it out or do you have any other suggestions to fix that? Good lookin' out! thx.
@Harmen thx bro! Are you saying get rid of the texture and the color or something in the actual mark? 'Preciate the feedback!
Also while I am thinking about it should I keep or lose the middle lines in the Cross or add them every where else to go with and inline feel?
@Mike Jones Hmm, that's not a bad idea to add the thin line like in the cross. Give it a shot (no pun intended) and see what it looks like. The only real problem I can think of with doing that is that as you make the monogram smaller, the thin line would have to go away. But nothing wrong with having two subtly different versions.
That's the only thin that bothered me. It draws a lot of attention to te cross - I was going to say delete the inline but if you made it within everything it might look more badass! Nice and keep it up!
@Todd Coleman & @scottrainy Thx fellas I think I am at least gonna explore that feel just to see what comes of it. 'Preciate the feedback very much y'all.
Wow Mike, so awesome. Keep chuggin you are right on your way.
Looks fantastic, Mike! Really dig it.
Love this Mike! Very unique and caught my eye right away.
incredible work. yeah i agree that the pencil lead needs to be bigger, i didn't even know it was there until I read your description
Ridiculous dude. Great work.
Now, I wanna be MJ)))
Oh wow, this is amazing work man.
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