New Year. New You

16 Responses

1. Kimberley Fox

   Preview of a poster I've designed for Elite Physique PT. This has been amended for the client version with all the feedback taken on board from Dribbble ;) Thanks for the warm welcome!

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   5 months ago

2. Alex Jegtnes

   Looking good, Kim! I'd perhaps add some more vertical space between 'New Year' and 'New You' — the 'New Year' isn't very prominent and fades into the background a bit; at a glance, I'd read 'New New You', glancing over 'Year' entirely. Worth experimenting with, I think. :)

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   5 months ago

3. Kimberley Fox

   Thanks for the feedback dude! Yes, I can definitely see what you mean about the text now you've pointed it out. Will amend shortly :)

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4. Pro Dmitry Prudnikov

   Nice shot. Pleased to meet you here

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5. Pro Ben Hubbard

   Nice work! As to what @Alex Jegtnes has said, an alternative might be to increase the weight of "new year" ever so slightly :)

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6. Pro Samuel Suarez

   Nice welcome!!

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7. Pro Greg Dlubacz

   welcome aboard

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8. Ty

   @Kimberley Fox - I will somewhat agree with @Alex Jegtnes. The spacing of the new year could be a little more symmetrical with the spacing of the New you, but other than that very well done! Welcome to dribbble - great start!

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9. Kimberley Fox

   @Ty Thanks for the feedback! It's been amended for the final design and it definitely looks so much cleaner and more readable ;)

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10. Pro Mark Law

    Nice! Great debut!!

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    5 months ago

11. Wade Meredith

    That's some really nice glow on the "YOU". Well done. Welcome aboard!

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12. Kimberley Fox

    @Wade Meredith Thank you :)

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13. Tomas Vateha

    great shot and very nice debut! Welcome o board :) I hope I will see more from you :)

    5 months ago

14. Kimberley Fox

    Hey @Tomas Vateha :) You will definitely see more from me as I have lot's of upcoming projects. Looking forward to some much needed critique and feedback from everyone on here :D

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15. Pro Mike Busby

    Awesome debut shot, welcome to the site! :)

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16. Pro Shaun Moynihan

    Excellent. Love the colors/lighting.

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