Preview of a poster I've designed for Elite Physique PT. This has been amended for the client version with all the feedback taken on board from Dribbble ;) Thanks for the warm welcome!
6 months ago
Looking good, Kim! I'd perhaps add some more vertical space between 'New Year' and 'New You' — the 'New Year' isn't very prominent and fades into the background a bit; at a glance, I'd read 'New New You', glancing over 'Year' entirely. Worth experimenting with, I think. :)
Thanks for the feedback dude! Yes, I can definitely see what you mean about the text now you've pointed it out. Will amend shortly :)
Nice shot. Pleased to meet you here
Nice work! As to what @Alex Jegtnes has said, an alternative might be to increase the weight of "new year" ever so slightly :)
@Kimberley Fox - I will somewhat agree with @Alex Jegtnes. The spacing of the new year could be a little more symmetrical with the spacing of the New you, but other than that very well done! Welcome to dribbble - great start!
@Ty Thanks for the feedback! It's been amended for the final design and it definitely looks so much cleaner and more readable ;)
Nice! Great debut!!
That's some really nice glow on the "YOU". Well done. Welcome aboard!
@Wade Meredith Thank you :)
great shot and very nice debut! Welcome o board :) I hope I will see more from you :)
5 months ago
Hey @Tomas Vateha :) You will definitely see more from me as I have lot's of upcoming projects. Looking forward to some much needed critique and feedback from everyone on here :D
Awesome debut shot, welcome to the site! :)
Excellent. Love the colors/lighting.
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