Timeline view iPhone app

Pro Virgil Pana

Guys, after seeing the feedback I got last week with the timeline I managed to convince the clinet to take this for another set of revisions and made quite a few changes and most importantly I got rid of that freaky paper clip :))

Full size: http://dribbble.com/shots/849357-Timeline-view-iPhone-app/attachments/89615

2likes
5 months ago
Pro Rovane Durso

Looks great. Better with the improvements.

5 months ago
Muhammad Bilal ☁

I love the details and texture. Simply & clean.

5 months ago
Abdallah Ahizoune

Very nice work @Virgil!

5 months ago
Pro Tobia Crivellari 

Cool one mate! @Virgil Pana

5 months ago
Pro Kobbie Da

Real beauty.

5 months ago
Pro Ricardo Salazar

Much better.
Good you could convince the client.

5 months ago
Pro Luke Etheridge

I'm loving your top bar buttons - 'nav' and 'settings'. Very sweet bud.

5 months ago
Pro Avinash Tripathi

yup!

5 months ago
Sam Mularczyk

So slick! Personally I'd bump up the text size a bit, just from the preview it looks a little too small in proportion to the phone.

5 months ago
Pro Ionut Zamfir

@Virgil Pana Nice work, bro. Definitely better than the other version :)

5 months ago
Pro Luboš Volkov

facebook blue - well done :)

5 months ago
Joe Norton

Where did you get that BG texture? I'd love to see the full texture

5 months ago
Pro Andrew Korytsev

Nice!

5 months ago
Simon Jensen

Good work!

5 months ago
Pro Kevin Hamil

It's looking very nice. Easy to follow.. doesn't feel cluttered. Great work.

5 months ago
Pro Taurean

I'm sorry man, in general I think you do great work but all I see is path right now. I understand that 1. you're restricted to the requests of your clients to an extent, and 2. Given a specific direction certain solutions are necessary even if they're not innovative. With that said there was plenty of room for exploration and change that it seems you just did not choose to take.

5 months ago
Aritz Portuondo

I love the answers positioning and view.

5 months ago
Pro Chandler Van De Water

1) Your layout doesn't look like Path, but your new post button is a little "over-inspired." While it may become an iOS convention, it's not there yet, and you'd need to differentiate yours visually a little more if you're going to borrow that functionality concept.

2) Your margins feel a little awkward. It's not necessary to always have the same margins/padding everywhere but in this, I'd retry on a couple of them: around the main avatar, around the main post, in the comment and decline buttons (I'd also make these a little taller to be easy to tap).

3) You've also go a 2-3px gray stroke around your photo post instead of the drop shadow. In my opinion, having different levels of drop shadow (Your main post with the comments slide out drawer under it) is visually distracting.

Just opinions & suggestions. Seems close!

1likes
5 months ago
Shad Romero

beautiful.... Love the presentation. Cheers

5 months ago
Pro Zaib Ali

Cool!

5 months ago
Matthew Walton

This will sound harsh, but I think the timeline on the left is a waste of screen real estate. Unless there are many easily confused post types it doesn't provide any useful information (a photo post is easily distinguishable from a text post without an icon as a cue) in exchange for cramping the content.

(You may of course have a lot of these post types and the previews just don't show them.)

5 months ago
Pro Gil

so much better!

5 months ago
Pro Luke Bornheimer

This is looking really nice! I would suggest making the '+' button non-flat as it doesn't mesh with the rest of the screen. Other than that, really solid stuff!

5 months ago
Pro Dmitriy Chuta

Nice

5 months ago