Looks good. But if i may critique, 3 things are really hurting my eye:
1) The dark areas on each side of the beam glow... remove that and you could make the background darker a tad that way you'd see the spotlight light.
2) The dark and saturated blue shadow on the base... needs to be less conrasted/saturated.
3) I feel like the actual light (top section) could have less blur in some areas and a little more detail in side it? Like an over-exposed area.
But the overall detail is awesome man, just thought I'd throw a couple thoughts out there.
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Ryan Ford
A spotlight I'm drawing for a little project here.
6 months ago
Your missing the batman logo :)
6 months ago
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harwen
Nice!
6 months ago
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Roman Bulah
looks cool!
6 months ago
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Tobia Crivellari
Impressive man!! @Ryan Ford
6 months ago
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Ilie Ciorba
What are you working on there? Why you profile is so blue?
6 months ago
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Ryan Ford
@Ilie Ciorba It's so blue because it's an illustration for Pivotshare.
6 months ago
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David Kovalev
Looks good. But if i may critique, 3 things are really hurting my eye:
1) The dark areas on each side of the beam glow... remove that and you could make the background darker a tad that way you'd see the spotlight light.
2) The dark and saturated blue shadow on the base... needs to be less conrasted/saturated.
3) I feel like the actual light (top section) could have less blur in some areas and a little more detail in side it? Like an over-exposed area.
But the overall detail is awesome man, just thought I'd throw a couple thoughts out there.
5 months ago
Love the lighting effects, great work.
5 months ago