So @Vaibhav and I, collaborating as Purtica Studio, are working on this writer's site. We have our differences over what direction to take, and this is my take on the site. The real pixels are attached. Would love feedback because I don't do web design very often.
6 months ago
I like this a lot :)
Although i feel that the social links should be put in a different position (maybe centered?) as they feel weird/off for some reason.
Also in the bio section, put his name & picture above the biography (seems a bit strange to be at the bottom).
I'm not the best at giving feedback but I tried haha :)
@Jake No man, thanks, great feedback. I agree about the icons, they're actually an icon font :)
I'll look into the avatar. Thanks man.
@Nathan Walker Cool man, good luck :)
I hope you can increase the line height for the para content: about me.
Nice color combo, ♥ it!
Good work, but for me, there is no spirit of game writing. Site a little bit barren.
Nice and smooth. Like it.
Hello man, it looks good, you are improving .)
it looks good but the same as the other one by @Vaibhav I feel that it doesn't tell the "story". Being Cameron Dayton a writer and story developer for Blizzard and having worked on things like diablo and starcraft I think his style should pass a little to his personal site, because it's what he does.
just my 2¢
ROUND ALL THE CORNERS
@Ari really? i think it's great! Nice colours. Definitely don't think it needs rounded corners :)
nice job dude.
Round *some* corners and it will be perfect.
Want an advice? Do web design more often, please! ;D
Looks really clean!
@Yura Yarokhovich and @Bruno Felicio Thanks for the feedback guys. Any suggestions on how to achieve a more interesting, relevant style?
5 months ago
looks really cool and clean :D
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