@Mike 2px line - that's the bottom edge of the background overlay. I cropped it from the full page design so it probably doesn't make much sense now. I should post a whole page shortly tho. Thanks!
@Gwen I placed the "Thank you!" where the text starts - you know "Email address" and where you type the actual address. Not sure if I should alight it to the left where the glyph was and I certainly don't think it should be centered. Do you see it as left aligned?
A good improvement, but I still wouldn't have used the bicycle since it might even confuse people that it is placed into the email field no matter how creative and fun it is! :)
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Many thanks to your helpful tips, Dribbble community. I very much value constructive feedback and I hear you.
I improved the subscription form - made the button on the right and happy cyclist to do the animation job inside the input field. What do you think?
P.S. The shot is modified slightly to fit 400x300.
P.S.S. More pixels attached.
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7 months ago
Ya, this has more call to action within it, makes more sense. Good job :)
7 months ago
Loving this Julia, great work...
What's the 2px horizontal line cutting through the form though? Should this be there?
Nice work tho!
7 months ago
The animation is major win.
Only itty bitty thing is the "Thank you" is not completely centered or left aligned.
Awesome job though.
7 months ago
@Tom Cool, glad you like it better :)
@Mike 2px line - that's the bottom edge of the background overlay. I cropped it from the full page design so it probably doesn't make much sense now. I should post a whole page shortly tho. Thanks!
@Gwen I placed the "Thank you!" where the text starts - you know "Email address" and where you type the actual address. Not sure if I should alight it to the left where the glyph was and I certainly don't think it should be centered. Do you see it as left aligned?
Thanks everyone!
7 months ago
Really nice, better than the previous one (everything in its right place)
7 months ago
@Julia Khusainova I see it as left-aligned to the edge of the form box. I think that will make it look the cleanest. =)
7 months ago
Much better!
7 months ago
better! and cute :D
7 months ago
batter one
7 months ago
So hot.
7 months ago
Brilliant idea, I love forms that don't just stick to the norm, this would really draw the user in. Great work!
7 months ago
much better!
7 months ago
Yes! This one is really good.
7 months ago
This is a much stronger concept, nice revision.
7 months ago
A good improvement, but I still wouldn't have used the bicycle since it might even confuse people that it is placed into the email field no matter how creative and fun it is! :)
7 months ago
Wonderful! And great animation too :D
7 months ago
Awesome animation :)
7 months ago
Thanks @Gwen! I'll definitely play around with it :)
@James You got it :) Thank you!
@Victor Thanks! Hopefully users will be able to figure it out ;)
Thanks again everyone! You are awesome, you know it ☼
7 months ago