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  1. Ari Ari

    over 1 year ago

  2. Chris Armstrong Chris Armstrong

    I don't know what this is.

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    over 1 year ago

  3. CJ Melegrito CJ Melegrito

    The icons are really big. Other than that, placing the words "The Industry" in the byline is pretty much useless since it's got the logo right on the top left. Just my 2 cents. Other than that, the layout looks good.

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    over 1 year ago

  4. Dan Beltechi Dan Beltechi

    (1) Podcasts icon looks big to me. (2) More line height needed, IMO. (But it's hard for me to tell b/c of the 2x.) (3) I like the look of this.

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    over 1 year ago

  5. Steve | blackcreative.co Steve | blackcreative.co

    The icons are indeed quite big, especially the News and Podcasts ones. I'd scale them down to ~80% and thicken the stroke of each icon a little bit. I'm not sure about how reviews is illustrated but I unfortunately don't have a solution to offer for this.

    I'd definitely increase the line-height on the article itself. Read it and see for yourself how far you'll go. With this line-height, it looks endless to me, and the lack of titles doesn't help. The content at theindustry.cc is awesome so I guess you should definitely improve the readability!

    Oh and same as CJ, "By Ari S" seems enough to me. I assume that the sidebar is hidden by default but this is an app for The Industry, right? Not necessary then :)

    I'm sure you'll come up with a killer rebound, keep op iterating, Ari!

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    over 1 year ago

  6. harwen harwen

    Nice

    5 months ago

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