I do quite like this!
You have a very strong silhouette of the bird and so many ways you could play with the negative space that offsets off the bird's body if you wanted to explore the "logo" bit. Also in the rebound shot, a pencil in the beak might be more "logo" than a leaf, I am thinking!
Thanks for the feedback Sneh. I think you are right, I will probably ditch the leaf in the rebounded shot.
Still not settled on this design yet. I have a few weeks before I relaunch the blog so have some time up my sleeve to play with a few more concepts. Cheers!
in my opinion it's too obvious, it's like you have a Poster and you write BIRD on it, or in your case a silhouette of a bird... if you see it you directly think "oh cool, it's a bird", I would feel like expecting something and asking myself "hmm what else? where's the surprise? is there some hidden fact?"
I'm babbling too much, don't understand me wrong, I love simplicity, but you can do it better.. and with that I mean Not just adding a pencil!
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Experimenting with a new logo concept for Logobird. Feedback appreciated.
over 1 year ago
i see "bird", but what's up with "logo"? think bird just 1/2 of "logobird" so add something that will emphasize logo
over 1 year ago
I disagree. I like this the way it is.
over 1 year ago
Thanks for the feedback guys.
Hmmm, too much bird, not enough logo. Perhaps something to think about.
over 1 year ago
Rebound
New Logobird Horizontal
by Logobird
over 1 year ago
#Dimitri I agree
over 1 year ago
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Sneh Roy
I do quite like this!
You have a very strong silhouette of the bird and so many ways you could play with the negative space that offsets off the bird's body if you wanted to explore the "logo" bit. Also in the rebound shot, a pencil in the beak might be more "logo" than a leaf, I am thinking!
over 1 year ago
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Sneh Roy
Having said that, I don't see why you shouldn't use the bird as is. So unique! :-)
over 1 year ago
Thanks for the feedback Sneh. I think you are right, I will probably ditch the leaf in the rebounded shot.
Still not settled on this design yet. I have a few weeks before I relaunch the blog so have some time up my sleeve to play with a few more concepts. Cheers!
over 1 year ago
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Dennis Salvatier
I agree with Sneh. I think a pencil would go nicely with the design. A nice little accent to show the draftsmanship of logo design.
over 1 year ago
I agree with Adam & Dimitri... more Logo
in my opinion it's too obvious, it's like you have a Poster and you write BIRD on it, or in your case a silhouette of a bird... if you see it you directly think "oh cool, it's a bird", I would feel like expecting something and asking myself "hmm what else? where's the surprise? is there some hidden fact?"
I'm babbling too much, don't understand me wrong, I love simplicity, but you can do it better.. and with that I mean Not just adding a pencil!
11 months ago