Toucan Logo Iteration 3

8 Responses

1. Pro Mitchell Bernstein

   We'll I think it's coming to an end. I feel this is identity is close to finish! Also, I realized this looks similar to something @Jord Riekwel did here: http://dribbble.com/shots/370581-Hummingbird

   Birds are AWESOME.

   6 months ago

2. Kevin Clark

   The previous one had much more personality and I think that's why I like him a bit more than this one, but you did a great job!

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   6 months ago

3. Pro Mitchell Bernstein

   @Kevin ClarkI Thanks for the comment! 'm thinking of adding a smile into it. I liked the first one too, but it just didn't align correctly. It felt almost premature. As if it didn't belong as a logo, but more of an illustration. This one still feels decent, but more appropriate. I liked the personality a lot of the other one :( But I do have plans for a future rebranding once we get settled with our apps and what not. We'll see what the future holds!

   6 months ago

4. Kevin Clark

   The smile makes it way better! Maybe bring back the dark part on its beak?

   6 months ago

5. Pro Mitchell Bernstein

   @Kevin Clark Dark part? Are you referring to his mouth?

   6 months ago

6. Pro Joel Marsh

   I agree about the dark part and the smile... the outline is a bit weak though (it would disappear at small sizes, etc.)... what if you put a little solid bit at the end of the beak and left a dark "stripe" of negative space, instead of the stroke? Just a thought.

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   6 months ago

7. Pro Jord Riekwel

   Such a rip off of my designs! Haha, totally kidding. Looking good.

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   6 months ago

8. Pro Mitchell Bernstein

   @Joel Marsh thanks! I'll play around with it and see what else I can come up with.

   @Jord Riekwel :P great minds think alike I suppose!

   6 months ago