OCBC Wave, Modern - Version B
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Jesse Gardner
Made the wave endings a bit more natural, but it feels like "iconic" this way.
over 1 year ago
Id suggest a third wave on the bottom. Not sure if Id suggest another gradient...but I think a third repetition would help.
over 1 year ago
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Sean McCabe
I like this lighter version with the tighter leading. Sorry to hear it wasn't accepted, but way to keep at it nonetheless!
over 1 year ago
Rebound
OCBC Wave, Modern - Reboot
by Jesse Gardner
Finally finishing this thing off.
The previous wave felt a little closed, so I added another line at the top that I think gives dimensionality to the wave without adding a lot of unnecessary complexity. To help balance out the added weight in the top right, I included some wave "motion" to the bottom left to help convey movement. I also squished the square into a rectangle so it doesn't feel quite so fat.
Nothing worse than fat squares.
over 1 year ago