Felt I was pretty close to a presentable concept on last Dribbble, so have taken the comments of a few of you and made those suggested changes. Thanks Rogie, Mattia, Sean, Seath. Putting quite a lot of faith into this first idea as its the only one Yasmin will have seen (she has not seen anything yet), and if it's off the mark, back to the drawing board. :)
This image is using a portion of one of her actual fashion shots, so just helps put the ID in perspective.
Mock-up Business Card
White & Black Backgrounds
Tweaked the YK mark, opened up the bowl in the 'y', thinned out the general weight of the letters and created a more noticeable slope down to the right on the baseline.
Some subtle spacing changes in the main wording, as well as changing font for the tag line. So far, Yasmin has not requested a tag line, so my 'England/London' is just as a placeholder.
Opened up vertical spacing between each of the 3 elements. Main font is still FF ScalaCaps with Gotham Bold for the tag line.
about 3 years ago
YES THIS IS HOT!
This is really strong. Nice improvements.
Freaking dope! Amazing work as always.
sweet shot Graham, works flawless!
Absolutely on the money big fella!
Now, this is what I mean as good design! Congrats Graham! And thanks for the mention! ;) I'm glad to have helped you...
Spot on mate. Well done!
This is an amazing mark. Definitely a thumbs up from me :D
I hope she accepts, this is great work.
great shot, very impressive! maybe retouch legs a bit?
Sadly, client felt it inappropriate for her needs. Back to drawing board.
That's too bad Graham. It was a great concept so that is more than a little disappointing.
Keep us updated with the next concept.
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