I like it, I just don't like the LONG list of people on there... for the user that might get a bit annoying to have to scan through a long list of people like that.
I'd have to disagree with @Juan Arreguin -- I think the long list is good as it's kind of symbolic, saying "Hey, everyone's on this site already." I doubt users will be scanning the photos anyway. Rather, they will view them more as a background element. This is already being done by http://zerply.com/ for example.
There are some issues with the design though. The biggest one is that I can't tell what the name is. Are you called "Everyone's", or "Everyone's car" or "Everyone's cars" or something entirely different? Are the cars your logo, or is that icon up top your logo?
The next big issue is the language. "Become arounded member" makes no sense. If "Arounded" is the name of the company, then perhaps it could be worded as "Become a member of Arounded" or "Become an Arounded member." Also, "we will keep you inform" should be "we will keep you informed."
A small, but still annoying detail also caught my eye at the far side of the screen... There are random white rectangles on the left of the facebook profile images. The padding on that box is also uneven.
Lastly, I have no idea what the call to action is here. Do you want me to be a member, or to sign up for some mailing list?
It's a pretty design, but has a long way to go for it to be truly effective. Good luck!
Thanks @Juan Arreguin and @Sebastian Sandqvist for your feedback, so I changed the list of people it's just symbolic as Sebastian said. Call to action is "play video" and the complete "name" issue solved by 1 word. But if you think about it, there is no one who would go on www.arounded.com and do not realize the name of the service :-)
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Hello guys, it's 2:38 AM in my TimeZone and I finally finished this version for a coder. So there is about 10 hours time to change it.
Please check it out and let me know, what is not good enough and feel free to "like it" :-)
7 months ago
I like it, I just don't like the LONG list of people on there... for the user that might get a bit annoying to have to scan through a long list of people like that.
My two cents :)
7 months ago
I'd have to disagree with @Juan Arreguin -- I think the long list is good as it's kind of symbolic, saying "Hey, everyone's on this site already." I doubt users will be scanning the photos anyway. Rather, they will view them more as a background element. This is already being done by http://zerply.com/ for example.
There are some issues with the design though. The biggest one is that I can't tell what the name is. Are you called "Everyone's", or "Everyone's car" or "Everyone's cars" or something entirely different? Are the cars your logo, or is that icon up top your logo?
The next big issue is the language. "Become arounded member" makes no sense. If "Arounded" is the name of the company, then perhaps it could be worded as "Become a member of Arounded" or "Become an Arounded member." Also, "we will keep you inform" should be "we will keep you informed."
A small, but still annoying detail also caught my eye at the far side of the screen... There are random white rectangles on the left of the facebook profile images. The padding on that box is also uneven.
Lastly, I have no idea what the call to action is here. Do you want me to be a member, or to sign up for some mailing list?
It's a pretty design, but has a long way to go for it to be truly effective. Good luck!
7 months ago
really nice stuff
7 months ago
nice nice and already some nice suggestions here :)
7 months ago
Rebound
Homepage v17 edited
by Martin Halík
Thanks @Juan Arreguin and @Sebastian Sandqvist for your feedback, so I changed the list of people it's just symbolic as Sebastian said. Call to action is "play video" and the complete "name" issue solved by 1 word. But if you think about it, there is no one who would go on www.arounded.com and do not realize the name of the service :-)
7 months ago
@Juan Arreguin @Sebastian Sandqvist There is a rebound hope you will like it :-)
7 months ago