@Bady Love this man - I like the boxed layout and how easy the content is to digest.
One thing, and I don't have a great suggestion as such, but I'm not sure about the gradient body. It seems to make the top three boxes not look so neat. I know a white body wouldn't work but maybe a flat (very light) grey? Like #f5f5f5...
Lovely! The grey in the background gradient doesn't do the rest of the elements justice imho. Although the white containers pop because of it, it looks a little dull. Have you tried a white to light-green (#f5faef) gradient instead of white to grey?
@Luke EtheridgeG @Yummygum guys, thanks for the concern and have time to provide constructive feedback! for the background it kind a bit rush but you should see the over all page which I will share probably tomorrow. Since this page will be viewed as user scroll down and the gradient transition are below the first section that can be viewed on a single preview on web browser, I think it's not that bad.. but it will be bias when I only viewed this single screen, and sorry for my poor explanation :P
Super clean and lovely. My only suggestion is to lower the opacity of the drop shadow on the boxes. Other than that as @Luke Etheridge said, the content is really easy to digest.
@Andrew I was actually gonna mention the drop shadow as well but I didn't want to come across as too harsh considering I'd already mentioned something. So yea, +1 on the drop shadow thing...
@Andrew Lucas thanks for the feedback man.. will try that,
@Luke Etheridge you are free to mention whatever you think it will help, no need to feel harsh as long as you point it in a good way :) thanks too btw.
You need to fix the padding here: http://cl.ly/L3V3 — I'd also give this a little more padding http://cl.ly/L3cr looks a little crammed at the moment. And at first I didn't know what this icon was http://cl.ly/L3Tt - I thought it was a comb at first!
Looks really great @Bady. I don't really have anything to say about the design other than what everyone said already. But I would make the Guest label Guests if there are more than 1, and Beds label Bed if only 1.
A landing page for Holirentals.. this is the first iterations. Due to infrastructure & many constrains the design should be as simple as possible. This include the design decision on the header which personally I think it's lack of brand tone.
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What I've been working on this month..
Will show the first section/ upper section of the page soon
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7 months ago
@Bady Love this man - I like the boxed layout and how easy the content is to digest.
One thing, and I don't have a great suggestion as such, but I'm not sure about the gradient body. It seems to make the top three boxes not look so neat. I know a white body wouldn't work but maybe a flat (very light) grey? Like #f5f5f5...
7 months ago
Lovely! The grey in the background gradient doesn't do the rest of the elements justice imho. Although the white containers pop because of it, it looks a little dull. Have you tried a white to light-green (#f5faef) gradient instead of white to grey?
Oh and btw, that navigation is so damn nice!
7 months ago
I love you for this :)
7 months ago
The primary navigation bar looks fantastic.
7 months ago
@Luke EtheridgeG @Yummygum guys, thanks for the concern and have time to provide constructive feedback! for the background it kind a bit rush but you should see the over all page which I will share probably tomorrow. Since this page will be viewed as user scroll down and the gradient transition are below the first section that can be viewed on a single preview on web browser, I think it's not that bad.. but it will be bias when I only viewed this single screen, and sorry for my poor explanation :P
7 months ago
agree with @Luke Etheridge ...
7 months ago
Super clean and lovely. My only suggestion is to lower the opacity of the drop shadow on the boxes. Other than that as @Luke Etheridge said, the content is really easy to digest.
7 months ago
@Andrew I was actually gonna mention the drop shadow as well but I didn't want to come across as too harsh considering I'd already mentioned something. So yea, +1 on the drop shadow thing...
7 months ago
@Andrew Lucas thanks for the feedback man.. will try that,
@Luke Etheridge you are free to mention whatever you think it will help, no need to feel harsh as long as you point it in a good way :) thanks too btw.
7 months ago
You need to fix the padding here: http://cl.ly/L3V3 — I'd also give this a little more padding http://cl.ly/L3cr looks a little crammed at the moment. And at first I didn't know what this icon was http://cl.ly/L3Tt - I thought it was a comb at first!
7 months ago
Looks really great @Bady. I don't really have anything to say about the design other than what everyone said already. But I would make the Guest label Guests if there are more than 1, and Beds label Bed if only 1.
7 months ago
The vertical spacing between the rows bother me. It's seems a bit much; I'd reduce it 10 or 20 pixels.
7 months ago
@Bady really like the price treatment/colors, stands out well.
7 months ago
Agreed, gradient a bit weird. Awesome job though! Shadows are a bit to intense on the boxes?
7 months ago
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by Bady
A landing page for Holirentals.. this is the first iterations. Due to infrastructure & many constrains the design should be as simple as possible. This include the design decision on the header which personally I think it's lack of brand tone.
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