I think the ending S is a little disconnected from the rest of the word. You may see about connecting it to make it feel more natural. It may require making the R a natural cursive form as well.
Another little detail thing, is to possibly soften/slightly round the points on the the star. I think the contrast from the hard points to the rest of the piece is nice, but if it were softened a touch I think it could blend itself together better as a whole.
Now that I look at it a little harder, there's a real awkward negative space in the lower-left corner of the outline of the D, between the swash and the loop...
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Oh man - Love this!! Colors are perfect. Amazing job Matt
6 months ago
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Cat Smith
@Justin Garand I couldn't have said it better. You summed up everything I was thinking as soon as I saw the logo.
Great job matt!
6 months ago
Intriguing. Are we looking at a community sort of thing at this website?
If so, I'm in.
6 months ago
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Brian Gundell
Beauteous.
6 months ago
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Joseph Blalock
#bookmark
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Joseph Blalock already did! lol! I can't wait to see where this site goes! Great Work @Matt Walker!!!
6 months ago
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CJ Zilligen
I love this so much.
6 months ago
Thanks guys!
6 months ago
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Matt Kauzlarich
I would never use a pencil that dull. ;) Awesome job though... looking forward to the site.
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Matt Kauzlarich lol! word.
6 months ago
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Tom Vandenberghe
Great! Finally (?) a website for this community!
6 months ago
I'd like to be a part of this.
6 months ago
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Tim Frame
When will the site launch?
6 months ago
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Andy Hall
sweet #bookmarked and looking forward to the site launching
6 months ago
I think the ending S is a little disconnected from the rest of the word. You may see about connecting it to make it feel more natural. It may require making the R a natural cursive form as well.
Another little detail thing, is to possibly soften/slightly round the points on the the star. I think the contrast from the hard points to the rest of the piece is nice, but if it were softened a touch I think it could blend itself together better as a whole.
6 months ago
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Sean Ferguson
Love the palette.
6 months ago
Very nice!
6 months ago
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Matt Kauzlarich
Now that I look at it a little harder, there's a real awkward negative space in the lower-left corner of the outline of the D, between the swash and the loop...
6 months ago
Hey Matt, I made the adjustment you mentioned, good call.
5 months ago