So I'm winding this project down to start getting the whole branding package ready for the client. This is the last piece of the puzzle! Word. The Final Logo Mark. Here is the sketch I will working from so any Feedback & Comments are most welcomed. I am having trouble with the "lion's head". So most likely it will look much different in the final product. Thanks in advance for all the feedback I have received already for the entire brand - hope everyone is having a blessed day!!
I like the Lion's head. Seems like a happy go luck fellow. However, I think that may be where the problem lies. Try a scowl and maybe a more blocky snout, with the line flowing to the goatee.
Also, the three-dimensionality of the anvil is conflicting with the border. You've got 2D and 3D intermixed, especially the lion's tail. It might be something that sorts itself out with higher fidelity. It also might look worse.
@Gary Chew thx bro! Also appreciate the shout out on Twitter.
@Emir Ayouni - I'm trying to get better everyday - studying people's work like yours helps! Many thx bro!!
@David Stewart - EXACTLY - good catch on all that. I am working on the face to get that "scowl" look working. As far as the anvil / border situation, love to hear any suggestions for fixing this issue. I am not sure what to do, either way thanks for the feedback bro!! Much appreciated.
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Mike Jones
So I'm winding this project down to start getting the whole branding package ready for the client. This is the last piece of the puzzle! Word. The Final Logo Mark. Here is the sketch I will working from so any Feedback & Comments are most welcomed. I am having trouble with the "lion's head". So most likely it will look much different in the final product. Thanks in advance for all the feedback I have received already for the entire brand - hope everyone is having a blessed day!!
6 months ago
So Cool! I see nothing wrong with the lion's head.
6 months ago
Utterly amazing.
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Bob Schultz & @Clif Dixon thanks fellas, much appreciated!
6 months ago
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Justin W. Siddons
Wow, she's a beaut'
6 months ago
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Mark Jooste
Sappin' arses!!!! Insta like! @Mike Jones you are a BOSS!
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Justin W. Siddons thx bro, much appreciated!!
@Mark Jooste lol! word. Many thx brotha!
6 months ago
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Pons Creative Group
That's so sweet, it makes my teeth hurt!!!!
6 months ago
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Kristopher Bazen
Make it happen, Cap'n!!!
6 months ago
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Christopher Perry
Yeah Mike! Looks awesome! Maybe change the 2 slightly, I initially read ZOTEN.
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Michael Pons lol! word. We need to get up soon!
@Kristopher Bazen trying to brotha - need to figure out its vectorness...lol! if thats even a word.
@Christopher Perry good catch - Gonna fix that up with the font I used for the banner in the wordmark. thx bro.
6 months ago
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Twicolabs
the tail is sooo great.
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Twicolabs Design thx yo!
6 months ago
I like the Lion's head. Seems like a happy go luck fellow. However, I think that may be where the problem lies. Try a scowl and maybe a more blocky snout, with the line flowing to the goatee.
Also, the three-dimensionality of the anvil is conflicting with the border. You've got 2D and 3D intermixed, especially the lion's tail. It might be something that sorts itself out with higher fidelity. It also might look worse.
Nice work.
6 months ago
the sketch is simply amazing!
6 months ago
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Emir Ayouni
You're taking stuff to new heights man. You're a BAWS, Mike. I love this!
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Gary Chew thx bro! Also appreciate the shout out on Twitter.
@Emir Ayouni - I'm trying to get better everyday - studying people's work like yours helps! Many thx bro!!
@David Stewart - EXACTLY - good catch on all that. I am working on the face to get that "scowl" look working. As far as the anvil / border situation, love to hear any suggestions for fixing this issue. I am not sure what to do, either way thanks for the feedback bro!! Much appreciated.
6 months ago
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Fulton Hawk
INSANE!!!
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Fulton Hawk thx bro! Your stuff is comin' up this week!!
6 months ago
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Nicholas D'Amico
@Mike Jones your truly gifted my friend! Thanks for always inspiring me to draw more!
6 months ago
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Mathias Temmen
Wow, @Mike Jones! It's breathtaking...
6 months ago
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Joel Glovier
WOW!!! That is AMAZEBALLS!!!
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Nicholas D'Amico Thx bro & You are welcome - I am just passing it on from @Von Glitschka who reminds me that it all needs to start on paper!!
@Mathias Temmen word! 'Preciatecha!
@Joel Glovier I have no idea what to do with your comment....lol! Thanks bro!!
6 months ago
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Gert van Duinen
That's sick dude! Just gotta love this!
6 months ago
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Mike Jones
@Gert van Duinen many thanks bro!!
6 months ago