Really like it. It held true to the sketch with a few changes. I dont like how the "NYC" and "2012" are hard to read on some of them. It's coming along.
@Joe: thanks! I think this is the strong direction to go towards. I agree with you about the NYC and 2012. Muncie is just too thin and condensed. Onramp works way better.
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Simon H.
Phew. Finally had time to put the final touch to this revision round. There are 21 alternates here, with the following variables:
- Typefaces (Onramp, Muncie Regular, and Duke, all from Lost Type)
- Diamond shape
- Outline style and thicknesses
There are still some alignments and spacing issues at this point (mainly in the placement of NYC and 2012).
Any favorites?
Also, this is how I created the gif.
And yep, I wish the brand would be BUILD for sake of symmetry.
6 months ago
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Joe Nicklo
Really like it. It held true to the sketch with a few changes. I dont like how the "NYC" and "2012" are hard to read on some of them. It's coming along.
6 months ago
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Simon H.
@Joe: thanks! I think this is the strong direction to go towards. I agree with you about the NYC and 2012. Muncie is just too thin and condensed. Onramp works way better.
Waiting on client feedback at this point.
6 months ago
I'd have a hard time choosing. There are a few winners in the group.
6 months ago
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Simon H.
@Kyle Gallant indeed.
6 months ago
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Built Performance Nutrition - Revision 03
by Simon H.
It's tied between these 2.
6 months ago