Breathezen

7 Responses

1. Jenni Schwartz

   I am new to Dribbble - Hi! Would love feedback on this logo I am working on. It's an all-natural nasal spray - how fun ;)

   over 2 years ago

2. Richard Young

   Love this. Not sure about the tiny tagline though.

   over 2 years ago

3. Pro Breanne Merrick

   Hmm, same here but I love the little splash. Nice first shot and welcome to dribbble!

   over 2 years ago

4. Alex Swanson

   Welcome to dribble Jenni. Its looking clean and well executed on the spray mark. My only suggestion would be maybe trying adjusting the size of the tag line - perhaps it could be the same length as "nasal spray" if it was bigger. Good work. :)

   over 2 years ago

5. Pro Sascha Michael Trinkaus

   Beautiful.
   Welcome to dribbble Jenni!

   over 2 years ago

6. Jenni Schwartz

   Thanks for the warm welcomes and suggestions! Loving Dribbble thus far. The tagline is bigger now and I will upload the final logo when it's complete.

   over 2 years ago

7. Pro Olivier Vanbiervliet

   I would try two different weights of Museo for Breathe Zen, to make it read better. Perhaps Museo Sans 700 for Zen?

   Good start~

   over 2 years ago