Looking for real feedback here. Legible? Busy? WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS?
7 months ago
At first I read the "W" as "U". Maybe work on the middle portion of the letter?
Nice start! Yea, the "W" is hard to read. Maybe the circle inside the "H" gets bigger so it almost touches the sides - might help it look more like a crossbar.
Hey thanks @Erin E. Sullivan @Alex Roka. I'm still futzin' around with the 'W' and 'H'. Will get an update on here sometime soon.
Love this! Great vintage feel.
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Looking for real feedback here. Legible? Busy? WHAT'S WRONG WITH THIS?
7 months ago
At first I read the "W" as "U". Maybe work on the middle portion of the letter?
7 months ago
Nice start! Yea, the "W" is hard to read. Maybe the circle inside the "H" gets bigger so it almost touches the sides - might help it look more like a crossbar.
7 months ago
Hey thanks @Erin E. Sullivan @Alex Roka. I'm still futzin' around with the 'W' and 'H'. Will get an update on here sometime soon.
7 months ago
Love this! Great vintage feel.
7 months ago