Two things. Have you tried Rafaella's in the same serif face?
Also, I'm curious to see what it would look like 1) in black and white and 2) at a small size.
I just wonder if you are adding a little bit of complexity where you don't need it.
That said, I really like this. I think you are doing a great job of combining an old style and making it look very fresh. Nicely done:)
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Ricardo Salazar
I am starting with a first logo concept for a food business. If you have any recommendation/advice please let me know.
over 1 year ago
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Luke Ritchie
any starbucks influence at all?..not sure about the 3 different shades of green..the "R" could be more decorative also :D
over 1 year ago
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Ricardo Salazar
@Luke agree, I will make just 2 shades.
The "R" is not finished yet, so I will have to work more on the central part. Thanks for your feedback.
over 1 year ago
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Jarad Johnson
Agree with Luke on the colors, but other than that a great first concept.
over 1 year ago
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Kyee
Honestly id say make the "RAFAELLA's" bit slightly smaller in font size. It feels a bit compact in spacing compared to other areas :)
over 1 year ago
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Joshua Taylor
Two things. Have you tried Rafaella's in the same serif face?
Also, I'm curious to see what it would look like 1) in black and white and 2) at a small size.
I just wonder if you are adding a little bit of complexity where you don't need it.
That said, I really like this. I think you are doing a great job of combining an old style and making it look very fresh. Nicely done:)
about 1 year ago