Love the illustration. Seems to me that it might be a neat addition if the bee's left hand was appearing over the top of the form, as if he was lightly grabbing it. The right hand already kind of looks like it's presenting the form to the user.
Thanks @Michael@Pasquale Good ideas...
I always have a problems with strokes on my illustration work, as this style does not have any outline work, so it tends to look odd, when I add it in.
Yeah, I know what you mean when trying to stick to that aesthetic.
Usually I'll try to add a suuuuper soft gradient kiss to give it a highlight just around the edge of where it intersects to raise it from the background, or just feather the stroke out into nothing.
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Matt Hamm
A sneak peak at a social stock trading web app I have been working on for the past 7 months: http://hivetrader.com
about 2 years ago
Love the illustration. Seems to me that it might be a neat addition if the bee's left hand was appearing over the top of the form, as if he was lightly grabbing it. The right hand already kind of looks like it's presenting the form to the user.
about 2 years ago
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Pasquale D'Silva
hahaha!
Suggestion- maybe some rim light/ fine stroke around the hand to separate the arm from the body stripe?
about 2 years ago
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Matt Hamm
Thanks @Michael @Pasquale Good ideas...
I always have a problems with strokes on my illustration work, as this style does not have any outline work, so it tends to look odd, when I add it in.
about 2 years ago
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Pasquale D'Silva
Yeah, I know what you mean when trying to stick to that aesthetic.
Usually I'll try to add a suuuuper soft gradient kiss to give it a highlight just around the edge of where it intersects to raise it from the background, or just feather the stroke out into nothing.
about 2 years ago
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Matt Hamm
Yes Pasquale! That is a great idea. Thanks for your help!
about 2 years ago
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Ben Tollady
When is HiveTrader due to launch, Matty?
about 2 years ago
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Matt Hamm
Who knows. It should have been a few months ago.
about 2 years ago