Everything seems well done and crafted with care. Just a tiny-minor-slight suggestion: you could saturate slightly your background texture, from neutral #E1E1E1 you are using, to something like #DEE1E2
I'd like to see the logo elements a bit larger. The symbols are difficult to see and the text 'Discovery Church' seems too plain, maybe a weight larger.
I love the design! As a Pastor and designer I struggle with the lack of anything God related, but I'll step back and acknowledge that this is a draft, not an online site.
Great looking design and inviting site. Accessable. Only suggestion, my old eyes had a hard time reading the italicized font at the current pt size. I would have to go find my readers.
Man Caleb - looks great as usual friend! Tiny thing that caught my eye almost immediately...(it's small though, so maybe it doesn't even matter)...that faint diagonal line that strikes through the & down in to the main image area - it just seems out of place. I'm thinking it may distract me less when you just cut it off at the horizontal line under '2012'. Again, this is super small - it's a great looking site!
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Caleb Royce Lummer
Redesigning Discovery Church. Suggestions / comments (as always) are welcome. Thanks guys!
Caleb
7 months ago
Love to see it online ! :)
7 months ago
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Cat Smith
Love the nautical feel to it. Definitely gives it an inviting feel. Nice job.
7 months ago
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Stanley Diaz
Looks great! I really like the typography.
7 months ago
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Caleb Royce Lummer
@Madelein Araya @Cat Smith @Stanley Diaz thx everyone!
7 months ago
Everything seems well done and crafted with care. Just a tiny-minor-slight suggestion: you could saturate slightly your background texture, from neutral #E1E1E1 you are using, to something like #DEE1E2
7 months ago
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David Lopez
Love the look and feel.
I'd like to see the logo elements a bit larger. The symbols are difficult to see and the text 'Discovery Church' seems too plain, maybe a weight larger.
7 months ago
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Caleb Royce Lummer
@Tasos Dervenagas and @David Lopez you guys rule! great suggestions. will upload revisions soon. thx!
7 months ago
I love the design! As a Pastor and designer I struggle with the lack of anything God related, but I'll step back and acknowledge that this is a draft, not an online site.
7 months ago
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Muhammad El Melegy
Well done sir!
7 months ago
Nice typo. Great work!
7 months ago
Great work !
7 months ago
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Joshua Krohn
I'd love those icons in the hipster X to be larger :)
7 months ago
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Caleb Royce Lummer
@Muhammad El Melegy @Abhimanyu Rana @Nolowene Nowak thanks everyone!
7 months ago
Great looking design and inviting site. Accessable. Only suggestion, my old eyes had a hard time reading the italicized font at the current pt size. I would have to go find my readers.
7 months ago
Classy!
7 months ago
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Kaitlyn Parker
Man Caleb - looks great as usual friend! Tiny thing that caught my eye almost immediately...(it's small though, so maybe it doesn't even matter)...that faint diagonal line that strikes through the & down in to the main image area - it just seems out of place. I'm thinking it may distract me less when you just cut it off at the horizontal line under '2012'. Again, this is super small - it's a great looking site!
7 months ago
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Caleb Royce Lummer
@Kaitlyn Parker Parker! I'm going to test it out. I agree with you it may be a bit distracting. I'll let you know when the revision is up. Thanks!
7 months ago
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Kaitlyn Parker
Cool man! I wish I had your web-design skills dude! Super job!
7 months ago
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Andrew Coss
Always impressive
6 months ago
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Jason Lenker
Nice.
3 months ago
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Baard Kolstad
Really exclusive and well executed. I would love to see the logo intersect with the main photo, maybe just like 1/4 of the logo. Just an idea.
3 months ago